| HOLY SHIT, KAGOME GETS RAPED AND U DONT EVEN MAKE INUYASHA PAY?????? AND SESSHOMARU DOESNT EVEN WANT TO BURY HIS CLAWS INTO INU"S THROAT FOR RAPING KAGOME!!!! AND U CALL THIS A SESS?KAGS FANFICTION MY FUCKING ASS.
Mi-chan- Tue 29 May 2007
well... I like the story, but there are some things making this story... troublesome.. I mean, EVERYONE's talkative... even Sesshoumaru! Everyone needs to explain their actions even if it's obvious... And one last thing, I'm sure you will be able to explicate your ideas even without them talking too much. a single sentence may be enough to explain something, not a paragraph-long one.
But I really like the story.. only a little improvement with the dialogues ^.^
Mi-chan- Tue 29 May 2007
well... I like the story, but there are some things making this story... troublesome.. I mean, EVERYONE's talkative... even Sesshoumaru! Everyone needs to explain their actions even if it's obvious... And one last thing, I'm sure you will be able to explicate your ideas even without them talking too much. a single sentence may be enough to explain something, not a paragraph-long one.
But I really like the story.. only a little improvement with the dialogues ^.^
SeSShY_LuVeR- Sun 29 Apr 2007
I really love your story but I kinda felt disappointed when I found out the reason that Kagome's eyes turned red was cause she was possessed by Kouga...
Oh well.
Anyways, great story and plot!
Lacey- Sun 17 Dec 2006
| this was a great story i loved it way to go.
Metis- Tue 12 Dec 2006
| Oh, good. It looks like Kagome at least is maturing.
| I enjoyed this fic i hope to read more that has been done by you goodnight it is late from where i am from
Jenna- Sat 09 Dec 2006
| please disreagre that lat comment. thanks!
Jenna- Sat 09 Dec 2006
| is this the sequal to Moonspun Magic? it not are there any before it i should read. anyway, all of your stories are great and i just cant get enough. Kags and Sesshy 4ever!
litlest_amazon- Mon 13 Nov 2006
| I've most certainly read worse but the grammar and spelling nearly killed me. I won't go into plot but Im pretty sure most women who've just given birth don't get it on right away. Plus if she's breast feeding and he tries that he will get milk in the mouth etc. best of luck
judzea- Tue 24 Oct 2006
| Interesting and well thought out story line. I liked it alot and looking forward reading your other stories. I don't think this story needs a sequel, it's fine the way it ended.
Kei Yotokana- Wed 11 Oct 2006
| OMG! I love this fan fiction it took me about 2 weeks to read(with school and all and not on weekends cause I wans't home too read it) but thats all good...but i'm suprised you kept EVERYONE(ecspt Inuyasha which that is the way he would acted if that DID acually happen) in check with thm selves I wonder if it would be wise to make a sequel? I don't know but that still would be up to you.
Megan Consoer- Tue 22 Aug 2006
| I really ike this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
Megan Consoer- Tue 22 Aug 2006
| I really ike this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
TAJE- Sun 16 Jul 2006
| Let me say that this is such great imagination! I truly enjoyed this story. All the emotions applied, touched me deeply. I would read this story again! Great Storytelling! Truly! Peace to You!
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