awww... its so cute and sweet! i loved the pace and adore how you ended it. i find that theres no need for a sequel and is just perfect where its ended. it has a feeling of closure and i like it. its kinda ironic how shes the one that waited and hes the one that was going to get married. great job on a wonderful oneshot! thanks much for posting

You had me worried there for a sec that they wouldn't end up together....But I like how you made it end......DO A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!
Like them arguing while she's in labor!!!!!!!!!!

i almost cried.... it was sad. but really good. i hate the part where he left her and he was getting married could he move on so fast in two years..... but he came back and broke the other girl's heart.... id hate to be her. :P... oh yeah when i said i hate it. i mean that i love the whole problem it makes it more worth while to read. you are an amazing writer KEEP IT UP! :P

i almost cried.... it was sad. but really good. i hate the part where he left her and he was getting married could he move on so fast in two years..... but he came back and broke the other girl's heart.... id hate to be her. :P