| i loved this one but i was just wondering you left out the part about her tail where was it other then that dam it was good
suleimacastaneda- Mon 12 Nov 2007
| I REALLY , ENJOY READING THIS STORY . IT'S KIND OF LIKE WOUNDED HEART JUST KIND OF SWEET !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Megan Consoer- Tue 04 Sep 2007
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Rockopuffjojo184- Thu 05 Apr 2007
| I really enjoyed your story. Your plotlne was sound, but i had a bit of a problem with your grammar and sentence structure. I find myself having to put words in that are missing or changing the verb tense because it doesn't agree. It's very depressing because the story is really, really good. Maybe you could look it over real quick or have someone else do it. I hope you take my suggestion into consideration. Thanks, and keep up the good work!
Sapphire Sakura Setsuna Nguyen- Mon 05 Mar 2007
Wow! This is awesome! Do you know how many times I read this? The difference is that I actually reviewed this time! ^_^
Can you make another sequel? A One-Shot perhaps?
Because I Can- Wed 20 Sep 2006
| Wow that was reallt good i'm glad i read that one now onto the next one.
Because I Can- Wed 20 Sep 2006
| Lol Naraku was sooooo anticlimactic.
Kitsune Within- Wed 20 Sep 2006
| I pick this one yaaaa. and then the sequal whoot.
serenity- Fri 25 Aug 2006
| please keep doing the lemons u do. u make the story seem more passionate and lively. Plus u r a talented writer and i would like to c that put 2 good use. :)
serenity- Fri 25 Aug 2006
| i love ur work and haveread all of ur work . absolutely amazing with detail and plot.
HarusCowGirl- Tue 20 Jun 2006
| I love the story so far. There are a few gramatical errors but everyone has them and they arn't that bad. Only thing I have to say is that some of your translations are wrong at the end. Not many but a few. Kuso is damn it, or shit not fuck. Also neko is cat not fire cat. both of these i got strait from the Random House Japanese-English, English-Japanese Dictionary. I don't want to sound mean, that was not my intention. I am only telling you so that others who don't know the language know the true meaning. ^-^
| omg! i cant believe no one reviewed! well, I'm da first^^ I like it, but then again...I like, like all your work... so neh, later!
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