Ehh.... To your first author's note on the 22nd chapter... If you think about it "Warui na hito" means "bad Person" so i guess you could say "chiisai na shinju" na is just one of those silly particles that I hate...like ga, and wa, and wo. Ugh. I love your fanfic by the way. Its so dramatic like something you'd see in one of those epic battle movies like LOTR or something. Makes my goosebumps go all nutty. D: lol I hope i helped a bit.
Lunasoleil- Sun 27 Apr 2008
Please up date soon! this story is very original and a good read!
Tracey- Sun 23 Mar 2008
i love this story and just wonted to no if ur gonna update it anytime soon
winggoddess916- Sat 22 Mar 2008
I can't believe someone actually thought your lemons were rough. Have you ever read "Pure Evil"? Now that story has some gruesome sex scenes. Anyway, I enjoy reading your story. Don't worry about your updates, I can wait for and update on a really good story, and yes The Once and Future Taiyoukai is a great story. The author is RosieB. Her works are awesome, and so is this story. Keep up the good work.
Yay! I enjoyed it imensely. Keep up the good work. And if you're doing the whole 'update email' thing, mine is theannoyedangel@yahoo.com I can never remember if people are actually doing that, seeming as it takes me several days to finish a story. Work and friends and all that good jolly shit. Anyway, keep up the good work and peace out!
~TH~
Where are you? I understand if you're busy, but PLEASE be sure to come back ok.
Bittersweet- Thu 31 Jan 2008
i loved it. is sesshy suddenly in love with her after everything he'd done to her? i can't wait for the next chapter! PLz up date soon.
fluffy- Thu 29 Nov 2007
Yay :] Love the chapter! (as always) Definately one of my fav fics. Please update ASAP!
summer- Wed 28 Nov 2007
Great story, I am really looking foward for the next chapters.
Choas_Queen77- Wed 28 Nov 2007
i quiet enjoy this fan fiction it is very different from others. i can't not wait until the next chapter is posted it saddens me that it takes so long for the next one to come out...oh well. i will continue to sit on the edge of my chair and wait for the next one because i am very much in love with this fic.
cjhaos
ixxora-hime- Wed 28 Nov 2007
you have got to update soon or else i'll have to find you!...and...and....err...uhh...tickle you to death! yes that's punishment fitting for you. Lol :p i have been a fan of this fanfic, i love its uniquity :p you could certainly pass for a novel writer XD PLEASE UPDATE SOON I'M DYING HERE. LOL *huggles*
ixxora-hime- Wed 28 Nov 2007
you have got to update soon or else i'll have to find you!...and...and....err...uhh...tickle you to death! yes that's punishment fitting for you. Lol :p i have been a fan of this fanfic, i love its uniquity :p you could certainly pass for a novel writer XD PLEASE UPDATE SOON I'M DYING HERE. LOL *huggles*
Red-Smartiez- Tue 27 Nov 2007
YAY!! I CAN NOT WAT FOR THE LEMONS!! ...mmm...lemons...xD
Well I liked this chapter a lot! It was touchy and well...KAGOME CRIES!! WOAH!! XDD
Can not wait for the next chapter ^^
Red-Smartiez- Tue 27 Nov 2007
YAY!! I CAN NOT WAT FOR THE LEMONS!! ...mmm...lemons...xD
Well I liked this chapter a lot! It was touchy and well...KAGOME CRIES!! WOAH!! XDD
Can not wait for the next chapter ^^
Midget- Fri 23 Nov 2007
Hey this is a really beautiful story, I really like how it turned out. How many chapters do you think you have to go??
I look forward to updates :)
Dee- Tue 30 Oct 2007
The story is intriguing!!! Please finish it. I can't wait to see where the relationship between Sess & Kagome will go.
You are amazing.
At first, I thought that this story was going nowhere but then as I kept on reading, I was so entranced :)
Suicide- Sun 28 Oct 2007
Wow, I hope Kagome will sort out her feelings soon. It's obvious that Sesshoumaru feels something for her - to take over a country is no feat done on a whim. I love stories where Kagome is reasonably strong; being able to hold her own but not some omnipotent being as other authors had portrayed her to be. I like this Kagome, because she is fragile and vulnerable, but only to her emotions and Sesshoumaru. Great job, hope to read some more soon.
AW555- Mon 22 Oct 2007
I loved it ^.^ Keep up the good work!
yamiyo tenshi- Sun 21 Oct 2007
what does Watashi no chiisai na shinju mean?
Koi- Sun 21 Oct 2007
*screaming* OMFG THAT WAS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD I LOVED THIS FIC I CAN WAIT UNTIL YOU UPDATE THE NEXT CHAP.
Red-Smartiez- Sun 21 Oct 2007
I hope a lemon will come soon too!! =D
I reallly liked this chapter! That stupid old youkai! Thinking he could overthrone Sesshomaru, what a laugh! XD!!
Anywho, loved the chapter and cant wait for more!!!
PLEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!!! ^_^
nilee1- Sat 20 Oct 2007
Wow, that's ominous.
Lemons are nice:-)
I just found this fanfic and I'm in love with it. I read all 21 chapters within a few hours. I hope you'll update soon. I can't wait to read more. It's rare to find a Sess/Kag fanfic with such a fresh and original story.
chareese- Sat 20 Oct 2007
srry i deleted my page and it was the fastest i could obtain.........anyway ur story is one of the BEST really it is! plz finish it for all of ur fans its a spectacular story and i look forward to seeing it completed...love sasukeswifey01
lolo- Sat 20 Oct 2007
yes...the lolo compels you to write a lemon
btw great story very dark but why does kagome look away when sesshomaru beheads that youkai? she slaughters armies after all :)
I had been wanting to read this story for quite some time now because your summary grabbed my attention, but I always got caught up in other things. I never remembered the title so I couldn't simply just go back, but yesterday I read the summary and was like "Hey this sounds familiar." and I immediately started reading.
WOW!
I love everything about this story. The pace is great, lemons juicy (although violent, but who cares), characters on point (even though some are ooc... it still fits in well). For someone who claims to have never seen the show you have Sesshomaru down pact (and let me just say that's not very easy. Ask anyone)
LOVED IT! UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN! Goodluck with school.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ASAP!- Fri 19 Oct 2007
OMG! Great chapter! I cant wait to see what happens in the next one! And by all means PLEASE write a lemon. Dont let anything or anyone stop you! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Koi- Sun 07 Oct 2007
OMFG I LOVE U AND UR FICS!!!!!!! PLEASE EMAIL ME WHEN THE NEXT CHAPTER IS GONNA BE UP PLEASE
AW555- Sun 07 Oct 2007
Awwww why diid you have to end it soooo soon! I'm glad you continued with it! I haven't read this since atleast chapter 13 and then I startedreading and was like hey I know this fic! I'm so glad you completed more of it ^.^ Can't wait till the rest!
sleepy tuna fish- Sat 06 Oct 2007
:o! I certainly did not expect that! YAY! More please :)
Suicide- Sat 06 Oct 2007
Ah finally! I've been waiting so long for this resolution. I just wonder when Sesshoumaru will realize his dependency on Kagome. Great job. Please continue.
Red-Smartiez- Sat 06 Oct 2007
AWW!!!! I think something called 'loove' is taking thme both over ^_^
GOOD RIDENS! I hope that stupid youkai lady rots in hell!!! XD
Awesome chapter ^_^
please continue ^_^
Ava 365- Sat 06 Oct 2007
I'm so glad you updated earlier than the other chapters. I hope Sesshomaru and Kagome get together finally!!! Kurki out!!!! YAY!!!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ASAP!- Fri 05 Oct 2007
Oh no you left it at a major cliff hangie!?! Overall that chapter was very awesome. The only thing I wishes was that it was longer. LoL! I cant wait to see what develops between Sesshoumaru and Kaogme now that these events have unravelled. Anyways great chaopter and PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Mika- Thu 20 Sep 2007
Wow, what astory!! I read the whole story just now, but I wanna read more of it!!! Please update again soon!=)
Chaos_Queen77- Thu 20 Sep 2007
Bravo! I started reading this story yesterday its positivly great, wow! I can not wait until the next chapter is posted.
Chaos
Kennedy-Kins- Thu 20 Sep 2007
Excellent Excellent. I'm glad you had fun in Japan. Plan on going myself one day and I am lad you've updated again. I love this story. Well thought out, plot cannot be faulted and just very very good!
naru- Wed 19 Sep 2007
Update!!! Good story. Ja
O_O... I was immediately hooked and latched on to your story since the summary. I absolutely love the passion your story contains. There certainly is a very fine line between love and hate. Your portrayal of Sesshoumaru and Kagome are excellent. Especially's Kagome's decisions and behaviors! Mmm.. I can finally see Sesshoumaru beginning to soften up. I do wonder how this story will end. Of course the wife has to die. ;_; Boo Sesshy's marriage.
Your story has been nothing but complete thrill for me! I enjoyed each and every single event and action. Each and every single character has his or own personal spark. And I especially enjoy Naraku's mystique! Very true to the anime!
Please more! Please please please on a stick?? I cannot live without this story O_O.... It should become an official story that viz should sell. I would buy. 2 copies. One for reading and one for display, because I know I would ruin the one I read for overuse.
Back to my main point -
You are so awesome on a stick and a half! More please? As well, I wish you the best of luck in your studies :)
Red-Smartiez- Wed 19 Sep 2007
awesome chapter!!
Kagpme kicked some youkai ass!!!! WHAT! XD!!!!
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU ^^
Koi- Wed 19 Sep 2007
Wow!!! ur such a great writter I can't wait until u update this fic cuz i'm soo curious bout wat is goin to happen next wit Kagome...and i'm sooo happy that u had soo much fun in Japan sumtime next month i'm gonna be visitin Japan too. is there any places I should no about to visit, before i go???
Go Kagome, Let the battle of war began between wife and mistress! Kagome shall show her stuff and Sesshoumaru will be surprised...or at least I hope so! I have been with your story since the beginning, and I have never read such an exciting, emotional fic. It's fantastic and I would put it up there with "Dreams", "A Sentinel Mother", "Means to an end", I could go on but you get the meaning of it, this story is great and it just gets better! I look forward to the next chapter.
It was nice to read one more chapter, Sesshomaru is such a jerk! He is using both Kagome and his mate!!! I hope he receives what he deserves for that and for mistreating Kagome for so long! I understand why Sesshmaru's mate (I don't remember her name) tried to poison Kagome, though. She probably suspects some kind of relationship between them. And will Sesshomaru some day realise he has feelings for Kagome? Don't keep us waiting so long for another update!! XP
Asian Tomboy- Wed 19 Sep 2007
Are kags and Sess's relationship going anywhere?
Tkeyah.- Wed 15 Aug 2007
I love you. Oh god, PhoenixBlade, I love you. This is one of THE best stories I have read here. The part in chapter nine where Sesshomaru-sama was making Kagome touch him during him explaining her mission.. I had to read that part over and over again AT LEAST thirty times. THIRTY TIMES. *pants* I can't even breath correctly because of you. I haven't even moved onto the tenth chapter [yes, I'm still on that part] because I keep reading that part. This story is utterly perfect. PERFECT.
lulu- Mon 09 Jul 2007
i luv it
its been a long time since ive seen a story wit backbone
:D
update soon plz
Suicide- Sat 07 Jul 2007
awesome fic. I hope Kag&Sess's relationship progresses for the better. ^^
have fun in japan!
whiteinu1- Sun 24 Jun 2007
keep going ^_^
clock-winder- Sat 23 Jun 2007
please update! such a great story!
fluffy- Sat 23 Jun 2007
OMG my heart is like pounding from that last chapter. i was like "he's gonna like hit her right! do something right?!"
Like i don't portray sesshy as totally evil, but just like as the story goes... well yea
but omg i'm still soo happy you updated! I never thought you would like ever again! :( but now i'm glad you did. with two chappies at that, but it still doesnt seem like soo much, i read them to fast xD i was too engrossed in them... (?) 0_0
Anyways, great 2 chapters, and i'm rele sad that you won't be able to update. I just might go crazy this time
From your loving fan, Fluffy :P
bleh- Sat 23 Jun 2007
you are such an amazing writer. this is one of the best stories that i have ever read. the characters are impeccable. they are original but still have the same essence that we all know and love. i can tell that you worked hard on kagome and it was so well approached about her hatred and how it almost consumes her entire being. i could go on and on about how amazing this piece of art is but i think that you might get a little big headed with all my praising. so strive to be better to get more from me! haha!
anonnie mouse- Fri 22 Jun 2007
Is she pregnant? that's the only reason other than he hates his "wife"....
btw when I first read this story in one of the first chaps didn't Sesshomaru mark her....wouldn't it kinda be like a mating mark?? or at least more of a mark than his wife has I bet.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
oh and Please don't kill Kag off or have her kill Sess but let Kag kill his wife!!!!! pwease??
I will say I've always been a fan of this fic. I personally don't find the lemons too heavy, but then with all that I right I have a very warped sense of heavy. Update when you can and keep up the good work.
abby- Tue 01 May 2007
please write more of this story it's so good
tolani- Tue 24 Apr 2007
please continue the story i`ve been waiting so long.
jestergirl- Thu 11 Jan 2007
i loved this story so far please cont. it
Ava 365- Sun 07 Jan 2007
WELCOME BACK!!!!! I read this fic some time ago and I just loved it, I was wondering if you were going to finish it or not. I hope you do because I love the story. It's very original. I love that Kagome hates Sesshomaru, but begins to realise that she doesn't that much. I hope Sesshomaru feels the same for her. I keep wondering if these two will end up together or killing eachother. I hope te read mor soon!!!!!
AW555- Sun 07 Jan 2007
I really love it and enjoy it. Keep up the good work!
remy- Sat 06 Jan 2007
plz continue! this story is sooo good. and the fact that she screwd naraku makes the twist exciteing!
swtdrm01- Sat 06 Jan 2007
I loved the story. Very interesting. I hope you do get to update soon. I am excited to find out how this story continues and ends.
Fluff- Sat 06 Jan 2007
Hot, hot, hot story! Its awesome!
Infernoqueen- Sat 06 Jan 2007
This is a master piece. Simply there are no other words for it. I might be even compelled to go into withdrawl if you do not update soon. Do you really want to live with that kind of guilt?
Megan Consoer- Wed 15 Nov 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
i love this story and i think the guest is a woman
Xiomara- Sun 09 Jul 2006
Man you ARE good... l really like your story, and l think that you should keep writing it. l'm so waiting for the rest it would be awsome if you would e-mail me every time you post a new chapter... l really DO like this story ... yay! for you ^_^
* XIOMMY*
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