I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Er, just so that I get this down before I get any further and forget... I'm at the point where Kags is showing Sess her prized Shikon bike, and you used the word 'coward'. You'd done it before in the scene with her showing off her power in 'miko class' but I guess I didnt see that you used the wrong word. A 'coward' is someone extremely scared of something. A 'crowd' is a large group of people. Please go back and fix it so that it says 'crowd' in those two places instead of 'coward'.

that was great. I cheered out loud when Yoko died. I really hated him. I loved the story. WTG!!

AHA! This interesting story is the reason you were to busy to update on the other one. Not that I blame you because Kagom ehere has an attitiude and all. It was great. I ejoyed it and am need of sleep.

Still...I have to ask...can you update on breeding school? Pretty please!

-Dani.

ardent admirer

Fuck, you have written a lot. Adding all of my stories together the most I've written online is 53,000. And that's adding my poetry and one-shot. I admire your dedication and zeal. Please don't forget your breeding school fic, I really love it although I can't carp on you about updating since I am usually remiss anyways, so I can only ask [and hope you find it in your heart to wrote more].

-Dani.

Fuck, you have written a lot. Adding all of my stories together the most I've written online is 53,000. And that's adding my poetry and one-shot. I admire your dedication and zeal. Please don't forget your breeding school fic, I really love it although I can't carp on you about updating since I am usually remiss anyways, so I can only ask [and hope you find it in your heart to wrote more].

-Dani.

I love this story it reminds me of something that happened in my life a couple of months back your writing is very good to I hope some day to see your name on the cover of a very famous book.You deserve recognition for your writing because it is brilliant and Heart catching at least from what I have read of your work.

You know this is the third time i've read this story and it never ceases to amaze me how wonderful it gets everytime I read it. I love the idea of the story and i hope to read stories just as well written.