Wow it was really good, I can't waite to read the next chapter keep going ^_^
Natarii- Tue 01 Apr 2008
no please keep on going i love it so far its so awesomely awesome and i love sesshomaru in this please keep going
here's to hoping you're okay, and everything is well. Please update soon, as this story is awesome!
really really good, i love it ^-^
Miranda- Mon 18 Feb 2008
Hey I think your story is great keep it going im really enjoying it :)
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Lunar Nightmare- Sat 03 Nov 2007
This is a great story, one of the best that I have so far read and I am anxious to read more. I am sorry about your misfortune, though. I have heard about the fires and I hope that you could be spared from it, even if it is unlikely to happen. Though I myself have not faced forest fires, I know the feeling of seeing all those around you whom have lost so much to cruel mother nature, though my own experience was caused by the world's largest tornado, I sympathize with you. I wish you luck on both this occurance and on your story if you can continue.
chareese- Sat 27 Oct 2007
hope ya have a great b-day and good luck.........like i said plz update
chareese- Sat 27 Oct 2007
really great............plz update i luv this story
elvira- Sat 27 Oct 2007
oh my gosh...
well hope your all right and so is your family...
take care out there alright...
update when you can!
goodluck and take care..
Ja!
elvira- Tue 31 Jul 2007
come on please!!!..more chapters plewase!!
racky- Tue 12 Jun 2007
That was GREAT!! you should write more
BTY:whats your favorite fanfic
HellsAngel- Sat 19 May 2007
I reeeeaaaaaalllllyyyyyy like this story. Its funny and romantic. Please update soon!!!
lIgHtNiNg_pAnDa- Thu 26 Apr 2007
i love you fanfic i hope you can update real soon because i am really zealous to read more
Kagomes_Inner_beast- Tue 10 Apr 2007
I hope you don't take TOO long to continue into the next chapter wonder what Sesshoumaru is gonna do now since he walked away from Kagome hehe hope to see the next chapter soon bye!
goton- Mon 09 Apr 2007
i'm really enjoying your story can't wait until the next chapter
megan- Fri 06 Apr 2007
i love the story so far and thnik that you should have sesshomarou come when koga is there and have kagome defend sesshomarou. that way sesshomarou would deafet koga, take kagome with him, and be happy that he gets to spend time with the woman form whom his affections are for. it would probably get jiucy from there but that's your choce. i think that you need to go over you story and look for errors because it's kind of confusing for someone who doesn't know what you meen( not that i'm saying that i don't understand).other than that keep up that good work and don't be brought down by haters.love you work.
swtdrm01- Fri 06 Apr 2007
Thank you for updating. I loved the new chapter. Please update soon again. What will happen next? Will she put Koga in his place?
NiCoLe- Fri 06 Apr 2007
WhAtEvEr
Katie- Sun 18 Feb 2007
Well I personally think he should stay and then maybe Kouga can walk in while Kagome's feeding Shippo and call him a hentai or something but then she doesn't my Sesshou being there because his a SEXY FREAKING BEAST!!!! I didnt mean to do that in caps but im to lazy to erease it. Well the decison isnt up to me thats just what I personally think. Well....update soon kay? Oh and you posted the notice twice.
ashley_kun- Sun 18 Feb 2007
wwwwrrriiitteee wwwhhhhaaattt hhhaaappppppppeeennsss nnnneeexxtt PLZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!
bound_and_blindfolded- Wed 14 Feb 2007
kikyo must die! hurry sess sweep kegs off he feet to marital bliss
fluffyangel- Tue 13 Feb 2007
he should stay, u should let him get the milk from her to i have always wanted to read something like that . anyway love ur story
luna- Sun 11 Feb 2007
well if you ask me you should put that sess stays. in my head i have it played that shippo plays a part in this, it would go something like this ...
sensing the milk in kags he turns to feed? and then kags realises she does not know what to do. put that is just me being evil and all. so in my oppinion sess should definetly stay.
Lilly- Sun 11 Feb 2007
He should stay, of course!!!
Maybe he could listen to his inner beast a little more (but not too much in the beginning) ;-)
~Sesshoumaru's~Bride~- Sun 11 Feb 2007
Umm hi i really like ur fanfic!!!!
I was kinda wondering, could i be ur beta?
(someone who looks it over for spelling and gramatical errors)
Anyway i really liked the fanfic so update soon! :)
Vaneles- Sun 11 Feb 2007
wonderful! And he should totally stay! ^_~
dian- Sun 11 Feb 2007
I think he should stay.
zen- Sat 10 Feb 2007
Hey, I think he should decide 'stay'. I've witnessed a feeding session and I want to see how you make sess not make it akward (sp?)
~zen
good so far. but you really need spell check.
you spelt wrath as rath. and Triumph as tryumpt and i have read just the prelude and 1/2 of the first chapt. they were more but i did no t want to write a whole review about mistakes. but the story line sounds good.
luna- Sat 10 Feb 2007
(insert evil laugh here) ha! i knew something like that was going to happen. now things are getting interesting. anyway im really enjoying this fic hope you update soon.
swtdrm01- Sat 10 Feb 2007
I think he should stay. It will make things very interesting.
Claudia- Sat 10 Feb 2007
You let him stay and hold her in his lap while she feeds Shippo. But the only reason he stays (so he says) is so she doesnt float away. He He He! OH great story!!
update soon
swtdrm01- Wed 07 Feb 2007
Thank you for updating. I loved the chapter. I hope you get to update again soon.
luna- Wed 07 Feb 2007
i wonder is he(sess) going to stay and watch kags feed shippo? if so omg!
yusumi- Tue 12 Dec 2006
very good! write more!!
swtdrm01- Wed 29 Nov 2006
Thank you for updating. That was a great chapter, I loved it. I hope to see the next one up soon. Maybe Sesshoumaru himself can get the herbs and take them back or give them to Ginta and Haku.
karon- Fri 18 Aug 2006
Hi! I'm Jenn Howard. That is my English name. My Native American name is Karonhisake; meaning Searching Skies. I's Karon for short. I was wondering when your next capter will be out after #16. On the fanfic "You Kidnapped my heart". thankyou for taking your time to read this!
lol, i love sessh's inner beats, he's pretty funy! lol
Victoria- Tue 01 Aug 2006
this is a realy good story i cant wait to read more!!!!
Solaira- Mon 31 Jul 2006
Poor Shippo, he's sooo sick, lucky thing that Sesshomaru found him and took him to his mommy. Kouga is such a sicko, he must be seriously punished. Let's see who to do it though, oh I know just the perfect Demon Lord for the job, can you guess who I'm thinking of.
Update real soon please, and thanks for creating such a cool story. I just love it.
Inu_Twins- Mon 31 Jul 2006
YAY!!! Finally a new chapter!!! It was good!! I hope U Update ASAP!!!
Catofhope- Mon 31 Jul 2006
SWEET i love dis story update soon please
yes! ilove this story! I hope youupdate soon!!!
awwwww... shippou is soo cute and brave! awww....mna i wish I had him!! ha ha
oh, yeah, umm before i read your an i left the last revieweand even though it's past your birthday by now... happy birthday!!! lol
MAN! I just love kagome's ways of forgiving people, i wish i were more like that.. heh heh, and ummm like kagome's not gonna go all pycho on kouga when she finds out the truth will she?
this story is really good, and i think this chapter was your longest yet!
from this chapter and what i read of the summary, this story looks really good!
Update soon...
~FFM~
kagome15- Thu 15 Jun 2006
please please please update ASAP!!!! GREAT STORY!!!!!!
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