This is an absolute pity party for Kagome...the way she presented does not make one feel sorry for her or even admire her, it just makes her look stupid and weak. All of the characterizations are poorly done.

I didn't sign in when I read this, but it is really really good. a little confusing at some points but other than that really really good!
Kira Nova

love it,,, ots gog

Very well done!

Very well done!