Reviews for Dragon's Prey by CiraArana

rdove- Tue 22 Jan 2008
I totally loved this fic. But yes it left so many unanswered questions!!!! You absolutely should do a sequel. Who cares if it takes you six mounths or a year! It would totally be worth the wait, No but seriously, sooner would be better ;)

Addy- Mon 31 Dec 2007
I am SO intensely grateful to whatever fates there are that I read this story when I did... when the sequel had not only been started but *completed* - although I definitely would have waited had I needed to - it's just that damn good.

'Nuff said ;-)


sarayuy11- Tue 18 Dec 2007
OHOH! pick me pick me! *raies hand* I do I do! I want another sequal Cira-san!

sarayuy11- Tue 18 Dec 2007
OHOH! pick me pick me! *raies hand* I do I do! I want another sequal Cira-san!

Kaiganeru- Wed 14 Nov 2007
Yes yes yes to the sequel... you must immediately devote yourself to writing fanfiction and only that -- real life you say? But how could that compare with your waiting fans, wriggling and in extremis over a lack of more... :) Please do write the sequel (ideally in less than six months or we shall have to tie you to chair and spoon feed you until it's done.


Megan Consoer- Wed 14 Nov 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Arsenic- Fri 17 Aug 2007
Wow!! Awesome story!!

Wanda Montgomery- Mon 30 Jul 2007
I have to admit I read the sequel first and enoyed it so much I had to go on the hunt for this one...and am I glad I did, The line that Sess delivers offering his help rocked me to the bottomof my feet. I immediately gave a schoolgirl squeal and jumped up. The feeling was intense. Perfect timing.

tealeavesgreen- Tue 10 Jul 2007
I really enjoy this story. Also, the random German, because my minor was German, and these days all I read is Japanese, so...yeah. Go German.

I'm actually re-reading (well, skimming past some exposition that I already know to get to the good stuff), and there is one part that kind of made me twitch.

You referred to the pope as the wisest and, if I remember, most powerful/holy/whatever. But...the pope around this time period is probably the guy who sanctioned the inquisition, and most certainly the guy who Charlemagne thumbed his nose at. I'm not thinking he's the wisest guy. Now, if you said that a bunch of monks had done it, or a wise man who was not a known historical figure. In fact, praising the pope so much actually made me twitchy enough to google it. Most likely, this "wisest" person was Pope Alexander VI, known for having many illegitimate children by his mistress, whom he lavished riches upon. He was Pope from 1492 to 1503. According to Wikipedia, "In spite of the splendours of the Pontifical court, the condition of Rome became every day more deplorable. The city swarmed with Spanish adventurers, assassins, prostitutes and informers; murder and robbery were committed with impunity, and the Pope himself cast aside all show of decorum, living a purely secular life; indulging in the chase, and arranging dancing, stage plays and orgies (culminating in the debaucherous Banquet of Chestnuts of 1501) within the Vatican itself." He was one of the most corrupt Popes in a long history of corrupt Popes.

The other possibility, Pope Julius II Pope from 1503 to 1513, was known for warfare is widely believed to have had sex with many young men, although he also had a child with a mistress.

Sorry to go all graduate student on you over such a small detail but it really irked me. The papacy, like any position of immense power and influence and wealth, is a breeding ground for corruption and selfishness. Certainly, there can be good men who are also religious and who want to help people, but the Pope is an unlikely one for that role. There is so much politicking back-room dealing involved that the good candidates are (or at least, they certainly WERE) almost always weeded out.

Again, sorry for over-intellectualizing on a throwaway paragraph.

TLG

stalker-named-lola- Wed 11 Apr 2007
omg make a sequal doesnt gotta be long just enought for sesshoumaru and kagome stay together in the end
and i want Divine Concubine! ^^

greatgoddess- Wed 28 Mar 2007
i want divine concubine

Digi- Sat 10 Feb 2007
gotta say, love yer fic so far!

Just finished reading the chapter where a dragon appears talking in German. I was cracking up, since I understood enough German to get what it was saying. Amusement.

Anyway, seemingly original plot(I've always wondered the same thing; why didn't the women in legends just take care of their whole 'virginity problem'? xD ) Oh well. I'm going to go read more now.

keke- Wed 29 Nov 2006
omg this stories rock. and please hurry and finish the sequel. PLEASE. i'm dying to know what else happens between sess and kags. also i really enjoyed the dragon prey. exspeiaclly the lemon part they were to detail. a don't this shinju, have any thing to do with the secrets of the shinju fanfic?

keke- Wed 29 Nov 2006
omg this stories rock. and please hurry and finish the sequel. PLEASE. i'm dying to know what else happens between sess and kags. also i really enjoyed the dragon prey. exspeiaclly the lemon part they were to detail. a don't this shinju, have any thing to do with the secrets of the shinju fanfic?

Mir- Thu 03 Aug 2006
*holds one hand up to stop you, and covers mouth with other hand.... fails at not laughing. Snorts a bit*
Divine... Concubine?
*pause, attempts to stop self with both hands... fails*
I don't care what it is called, no mater how odd sounding, I want more! Stupid Kikyo.. always getting in the way, and then making you feel bad for thinking she’s in the way. Damn them all... except Sesshomaru.... who's help I accept...

Mir- Thu 03 Aug 2006
Dear god in heaven and lord of hell! Don't offer to help me, just help me! Cripes sake! HAHAHAHAHA!!! Damn! I want those bloody dragons in our world (and Sesshomaru of course)!
Breathes... Good lord, I read the line and ***BAM*** I start flipping out saying "hell yes" out loud, my friend yells at me because it's four in the morning and I woke her up - though she quickly agreed with me - wow.... you rock.... What a stupid ass question though..... okay.. I think I’m done....
Stupid Sesshomaru... no woman would turn down your help...

Heza-- Mon 31 Jul 2006
Want more! Want more! I love it so much! WANT MORE!

RavenSilverKat- Mon 24 Jul 2006
*raises both hands and gets everyone around her to raise both their hands too even though they have absolutely NO idea what's going on* Me, me, me!!!! I want the sequel!!!! *waves arms frantically*

Midget- Sat 22 Jul 2006
Man that was an awesome story, but when you had THE END, I thought you were gonna say: "- Just joking! I'm not that evil-" BUT YOU WERE!!!!!! I did see a another story after this one though, so hopefully that would be a long one, because i love long stories. Anywho, a million bucks to you for an awesome read!!! Loved it. Go Fluffy!!!! - Peace

kuma- Thu 06 Jul 2006
i loved it i want a sequel

Chaos_Queen77- Wed 05 Jul 2006
oh my god this was awesom it was a very unique story that i have not read yet i must say it was original.

Serena- Thu 29 Jun 2006
Of course I would want you to write "Divine Concubine". I WOULD BE CRAZY NOY TO! So please please please write the sequel and many more to follow. Otherwise it is just left at a stand still, and just thinking of that is uncomfortably upsetting.
I shall see you in the future

AccidentalGoddess- Thu 29 Jun 2006
Oh my god, I love this fic. I've read it three...no, four times now, it's so good. When I saw that you were starting on a sequal, I just had to read it again before I moved to the next part. And I have to say, I'm really glad that you're making a second part to it. While good in and of itself, it's always felt like there could be more to it. And you should just see the big-ass grin on my face over here! Yay!

AG

45cats- Thu 29 Jun 2006
I've read this 4 or 5 times. It's one of my favs. I think you ended it when you should have. A story doesn't have to last 40 chapters to be good.

Personally I would love it if you finished The Diary. *hint*

Katrina- Thu 29 Jun 2006
i love that story *looks at you all stary dreamy eyes* that was a great story you did i would like to see more of the story lol

ger- Wed 28 Jun 2006
I have both hand up in the air I love this so much and well I just love it and I cant wate for the rest^_~

ger- Wed 28 Jun 2006
I have both hand up in the air I love this so much and well I just love it and I cant wate for the rest^_~

divine pearl- Wed 28 Jun 2006
Write it! oh, pity peas!? (Pretty Please!?)
it didn't matter if it wasn't supposed to be, it was, and now, the sequel isn't supposed to be, but it should be! the fic is, so now, make the sequel!

~*Mystra*~- Wed 28 Jun 2006
Okay, okay this is now officially my favorite Sess/Kagome lemon of ALL time. Gorgeously written, well done and realistic in that gritty, sensual, slightly awkward way that only sex can be. I love it and I've now officially read it something like ten time. Thank you, thank you and someday I hope maybe you'll do something else in this universe you created.


Crazar- Wed 28 Jun 2006
"throws both hands in the air and chants" Sequel, sequel..."gains composure. Ok, I enjoyed this way too much and would love a sequel. You are a great authoress!

serena- Wed 28 Jun 2006
Are you kinding me?! O freak yeah I wanna sequel!WOOT!!!

serena- Wed 28 Jun 2006
Are you kinding me?! O freak yeah I wanna sequel!WOOT!!!

Sarah- Tue 20 Jun 2006
Oh please please please please may i have the sequel to dragon's prey? I really love the story!! Hell i love all of your stories. especially the diary. well anyway can i have the sequel to dragons prey? I'll keep looking for it on the sight. Ciao!

kotainuchan- Thu 15 Jun 2006
ummm yessssss please could you write a sequel! I totally dug this story!

elise- Mon 05 Jun 2006
you should totally write a sequel! sesshy is so hott and your one the few writers who is actually good at writing....please.

DreamBeamz- Mon 05 Jun 2006
*hands up* I want a sequel, I want as much story as possible, pretty please times a million!!!

DreamBeamz- Mon 05 Jun 2006
What passion!!! Poor Kagome does not realize how much he still wants her!!!!

DreamBeamz- Mon 05 Jun 2006
The last line set my whole body on fire, wow!

Dreambeamz- Mon 05 Jun 2006
Yay Sesshomaru will be with us soon!

DreamBeamz- Mon 05 Jun 2006
Oh what a sweet sad chapter, gotta read more!

DreamBeamz- Mon 05 Jun 2006
Miroku x Sango lemon lovely!

DreamBeamz- Sun 04 Jun 2006
I love Miroku's reaction, the best ever!

DreamBeamz- Sun 04 Jun 2006
someone found out part of the riddle, hehe

DreamBeamz- Sun 04 Jun 2006
Watched with dead eyes, makes you wonder. Oooh, and did I detect a bit of German there? hehe.

DreamBeamz- Sun 04 Jun 2006
Ooh nice plot, hehe! I’m so glad your one-shots get bigger, yay for us! ^_^ I love your ramblings, especially the end part about possibly why there are no dragons today, haha! I love it!! I'm glad Inuyasha and Miroku came to their rescue and thankfully they are safe, love the whole naked situation, fun could definitely follow this, hehe!

niki- Wed 31 May 2006
yay i want divine concubine plz plz plz sequel sequel sequel plz plz plz, this counts for 1000 hands up lol and again another 1000 hands

niki- Wed 31 May 2006
yay i want divine concubine plz plz plz sequel sequel sequel plz plz plz, this counts for 1000 hands up lol

whitedragon235- Sat 27 May 2006
OH PLEASSSSEEEE!!!! Write a sequel!!! The story itself is beautifuly written. I love how u added the german into the dragons dialect! I'm guessing this is ur native tongue. If so, this is when u say: "Naturlich!"

Megan Consoer- Wed 24 May 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

RebaJean- Sun 21 May 2006
I read it again! Still one of my top ten all time favorite Inuyasha fanfics. I look forward to the sequel.

K.M.- Thu 18 May 2006
I want the sequel!! Please come out with it soon. One good story deserves another!

Sailor-Saturn-415- Sun 14 May 2006
This was an amazing fic!! I absoloutly loved it!! I want a sequel!!! Please! Thank you!!

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