this was an awesome fic
XD
i love ALL of your work!!

loved it, didnt love the ending. When people end that way it feels very rushed. I would have liked to know how the rest of the people who worked with sess would have felt and reacted, and if naraku got a divorce, and so forth. Also, i think you made kagome way to young. In real life sess would have been arrested and if he works for the mafia, his enemies would have attacked and slandered his name. It was good but could have been better.

you know in a previous chapter kagome made it obvious she knew she was a demon. When sango told her he would know she lied b/c he was an inu demon, she said oh yea.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

... i have to say. i'm kind of dissapointed of the last chapter. everything else was awesome, but the last chapter had too much something.. and too little something.. anyhoo, overall, the story was great. thx for uploading!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wow, that was really good. I'm glad I had went back to read it to day! ^_^

-KB

aweeee
that was a cute ending.
:D

but... now its over. :'[
thats not cool.

this was definitely a favorite

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it. Finish it with her PG please!! Oh and please make a sequel

i can't wait for the last chapter i so luv this story and i hope u update soon i wonder what will happen in the last chapter

Woot! I know I've been waiting for this chapter! Nice one as well! ^__^

-KB

im liking this more and more.
please continue
tilayha

I Realli Like This Story! Please Update Soo. Sessho Is Sooo Abusive He Needs To Work On That!

ohhhh goodness. is the *%#$ gonna hit the fan or what!!! hee hee cant wait to find out
tilayha

._. i can just imagine their reactions now... now that is amusing lol

Please hurry and update soon okay!

Ja Ne!

so boldly

This is a good chapter but you said the baby was a he not a she. Love your story update soon.

I hope to get more chapters soon.
Yours Truly
Aki-kawa

I'm so glad you updated! I've missed this fic for so long! ^_^

-River

hey great story so far i like it alot

hey great story so far i like it alot

awesome chapter!! hurry and update real soon okay!

I read a story of yours on ff.net and you really just like Sess to be violent don't you?

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWW, that cool.

I have a question, is there any posibility that kagome and sess to be together now that the character of sessh in this fic is like a father of hers? and has kagome replaced rin?

hey, Nice fic. I was following it yesterday till I had to get off, And I forgot hwo wrote it and I was like, who was it, argh!!!!!!!!!!!!

And then i saw kags21, and I think you're on the yahoo group thingy?? The A single spark one?? So I was like, hey that author sounds familiar, and I clicked on it, LUCKY!!! Lol. I'll have to write you down, I have so many favourite fics and all.

Anyway hope you update this soon, if you ar estill on going with it, and thanx!!!

Midget

I enjoy reading this fanfic! I cant wait to read more!

OMG! I didn't know you wrote this...*hits self in head* I am so dumb...LOL Plz update this. I love this fic!!

I cant get enough of the story i hope you update it really soon

wow!!! WOW!!! this is such a great story :) i can't wait till the next chapter :)

-gets the the part saying:
"Sesshomaru pick right now. If you lay a finger on her, you will lose me as well." Kagome told him in a voice that wasn’t her own.-

WHAT!!
-eyes are wide and mouth drops in shock. slowly turns head all the way around to face Kags21- you ended it on such a cliff hanger! please hurry and quickly update i just have to know what happens and in the mean time i'll read tired of running!

~Ja ne!

holly shit I love that! omg omg....*gasp* ohhhh i cant wait for the next chapters there should by like a rape seen...or murder....er somethin....next lol well anyway i love the story Please KEEP IT UP!!!=O

-Able Jay insane-

holly shit I love that! omg omg....*gasp* ohhhh i cant wait for the next chapters there should by like a rape seen...or murder....er somethin....next lol well anyway i love the story Please KEEP IT UP!!!=O

-Able Jay insane-

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

wow i like it please keep going

wow i like it please keep going

wow that was good

hey I really like the chapter I can't wait to read the next chap. Please update real soon!

wow i like it please keep going

Damn, that girl is a spoiled bitch!! I hope you let me know when you update and I hope it'll be soon.

flaming_kitsune@hotmail.com

Tai

Hey I really like the story...and what is really wierd is that Naroku's last name is the same as mine...wierd...

I loved your new chapter!! How about a chapter telling about what Sesshomaru did to his sis in the past. Sort of like a filler chapter. Just a suggestion, not a comand.
Ja ne
Lady Sesshomaru

Will her parents do anything to Sesshomaru, when they find out?

Kagome might lecture him a bit.

Please update ASAP

Hey, I just wanted to tell you that I love this story, also all of your other ones. Keep up the good work, and of course I have to say "Update soon!" Lol.
~MelancholyVoice

wow i love this story i can't believe i didn't read it sooner more please can i please have some more :) please update :) i spent all night reading your story so make me do it all again when you update :)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How could you leave me hangign like that come on and update!!!!!!!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

wow thats was good so far i love it
i never knew he was gonna tell her now,please finish its good

Cat: MAFIA!!!
BCat: sweet im getting some stuff from him OH FLUFFY!
Muse: MORE BLACKMAILING STUFFFF !!!!! YAY!!
Fluffy: one word "shit" *gets mobed by BCat*
Cat: we loved it ..... some more then others
Muse & BCat: HELL YEAH KEEP IT UP

wow i like it please keep going

OMG HE TOLD!!!!!! >>>>>>>>>.<<<< I can't believe it. OH well wil she go byebye or stay.

SUH-WEET!

=)

wow i like this please keep going its geting to good

I started to read this story in fanfiction.net but then it stoppe din the pool scene, but this is way cool! I love your Naraku character. Evil/kind father, hehe! Next chapter inuyasha and kag can become closer friends -no attraction-but he realizes that Kikyo isn't worht it.

AAAAHH!! --beats head-- Why did you have to cliffy it?! T__T OOOh WHHHYYY?! I'm crying over here! ;_;
Well I really like this, it's most def original! ^_^
Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the following chapters!!!!

Update soon! Peace.

Ahhh!! big cliff !! you have to update ASAP. i love this fic.! Keep up the good work.
Kambri_Jade

noooooooooo i should shoot u for the way u ended that... u must hurry and type so i no what happens next now hurry i order u to hurry!!

Aw come on why stop there i was so ready for more nice chapter can't wait for more update soon plz!!!! :)

Ya know it was going good until that big space and at the bottom of that space it said
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WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

IS KAGOME PREGNANT!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

I HOPE SO!!!!!! THAT"LL BE INTERESTING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I honestly forgot but is Shippo in the story yet? If not Kagome should find him and adopt him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I WANT TO SEE SESS'S DAD TRY TO KILL HIM FOR ROBBING THE CRADLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok totally crappy cliffy i dont like those at all O.o

I LOVED IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON

wow that went great!! hurry and write more i'm glued to the pc waiting for more!!!

Nothing like a good lemon before bed! good chapter keep it up!

So...being that he bit her neck while they were....you know...does that make them mates??
I want them to have pups!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Pretty Please
*puppy dog eyes*

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved it. This was a cool story. It had my name in it. Narakus wifes name is Savannah and so is mine. Update soon.

heyy i love the story so far please add some more chapters i love it and i would really like to know what kagura and kikyo are planning but when will kagome and sesshomaru do it?

Another Great chapter!!
Q. So Sesshomaru told Naraku about kagura & Kagome ?Thats how he knew she was planing something?
Anyways it was awsome , so plz updat ASAP. Kambri_Jade

I love the story i also like how well Sesshomaru and Kagome r put together.

okay here's an idea okay well they tie her up and gag her and throw her into an unused room with something in there scarring her sensesless all night, sesshomaru is getting worried so he files a missing person report but in the morning someone finds her but before the person finds her the thing in the room is telling kagome that she is to disappear if she wants to remain living and that she needs to never see inuyasha or sesshomaru again that she is to runaway and never come back

^^ i'm evil aren't i maybe i'm evil but i'm nice too OO never a good combination together!!

::Sigh:: high school drama.. lol brings back memories. Good chapter. I bet that Kikyo and Kagura are planning to somehow expose sesshomaru and kagome. probably by a horrible way of bad seduction.. lol after all teenagers are..... well.....yeah.... haa haaa

Kikyo/the girls slip something in Sessy's drink and the dumb blonde {forgot her name. the one that made the big scene at Kag's birthday party} is in a compromising sitch with Sessy. Kag sees and maybe runs.
I wonder when Fluffy will lose control of his beast when Kagome's around {in heat too}.

hi kags21 my review lost some words soo if something doesn't make sense srry

ohhh kagome and sesshoumaru go somethin' going kikyo and kagura are a bunch of slutty bitches that have sex with other men then their boyfriends !?! kagura is a jealous bitch kikyo is just a plain revenge bitch love story though kinda odd cause sesshoumaru is like her guardian and it is just like odd to me but that is my opinion ok soo still really really really reallly awsome story please tell when next chappie is up ok kags21

Fluffy a pedophile and a mobster!!!! Very cute. It was great reads

I really Really REALLY HATE KAGURA AND KIKYO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!>.
EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I want to see by the end of the story Fluffy and Kag's puppies!!!!!!!!!!!!(as in kids)......please? *puppy dog eyes*

oooo... kagura and kikyo are such bitches!! grrrrrrr!

awesome chapter ^^ hurry and update soon!

wow! i really like this story, but i'mkinda worried about how other people will react to them... but idc cuz it really cute!

YEY i love this story so much i cant wait to read more

It's abut time u wrote another chap. I was beggining 2 think u stopped writing 4ever. Since that is not the case I am pleased 2 c ur work once again being on my favorite website.

YAY!!!!!!u posted another chapter!!^.^write more!i lov this story!!

This story is awesome! Update soon! Peace.

luv it

wow your fanfiction is really great. I really want to read more. I thinking of doing my own too. Hope you finsh the story soon because it is amazing.

i only have one word to say.... UPDATE!!!!!! -sigh-

I loved This story so much ! I hope that You will udate Soon!

Update please, Your story is so good

i love this story its great i really hope you post the next chapter soon. it would make me happy. *gives big grin*
thank you for you hard work so far,
britt

please do more soon!!!!

I"M LOVIN' IT SO FAR!!!!!!!!!! MAKE MORE CHAPTERS PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

don't you mean he was 29 because 15 and 14 is 29 so they are both 29 years old.

I LUV UR STORY PLEASE ADD SOME NEW CHAPTERS I JUST LUV IT

um,i think this is how u review??(i've never reviewed before)but anyways i like ur story*ownership*keep writing!!^,^

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

*Hangs Kags21 off a cliff by her toes* There! See how you like cliffies!!! I thought you died. Write more!

OMG that was good!!! You have to update soon!!! Plzzz!!!

Short chapter but good

UH youre just like shichan 2 and mute shadow never update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but make new stories and dont update those!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

heyy love ur story please do continue the story

please do more soon!

i love this fic it is so cute please write more soon! please!!!

I Love your story, but when are you going to update. I can't wait to see what else happens.