Okay.
two words.
AMAZING.
Can I tell you something though?
Make the place alittle colder. More cruel.
That's how it seems for patients and personnel. We feel as if we are being judge, watched, and probed at. We hate it.
FangedBeasty- Tue 08 Jan 2008
Great story! I really enjoy were it is going and can't wait for more!
:)
-FangedBeasty
Suicide- Fri 04 Jan 2008
That's rather depressing. What is wrong with Souta?! Him like that makes me sad. This story really interesting and makes you wonder about what happens between Kagome and Sesshoumaru to make Kagome turn out in a mental hospital. Please continue.
beckyducky (not logged in)- Fri 04 Jan 2008
omigosh!! this is one of my favorite fics already!! zomg!! im a big fan of first person narratives and this is one of the best so far!! update soon plz cuz ur fic is soo good!! ^^ everyone is in character - and in my opinion, no one more so than naraku himself for the one reason that if he is placed in a situation that is an alternate universe, i really do believe that he would act like that!! oh wow!! can i have ur electronic signature?? *blushes like a raving fangirl*
arielle langley- Fri 04 Jan 2008
Aww that was very good kawaii but anywho keep up the good wrk n update soon thanks
arielle langley- Fri 04 Jan 2008
Aww that was very good kawaii but anywho keep up the good wrk n update soon thanks
tinky- Fri 04 Jan 2008
Oman u cut us off hope u update the story soon
tinky- Fri 04 Jan 2008
Oman u cut us off hope u update the story soon
what's going to happen?! O-o
Sesshy's Rose- Thu 03 Jan 2008
I LOVE this story! You have a very original plot going on here. I like how you switch from third person to Kagome's sight (first person) so fluidly...and yet it's easily understood...same with past and present. I can't wait to see what happens next!
arielle langley- Wed 02 Jan 2008
I Like this story alot but could u please make the chapters longer pleeeease othet than that keep up the good wrk
roseylove- Wed 15 Aug 2007
i love this story its so mysterious and you'll never know whats gonna happen ps. if ur event thinking about contacting me try to do that on myspace
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