I loved it!
Megan Consoer- Tue 14 Nov 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
I LOVED THIS! I started reading it and couldn't stop. This was so great i love how you made kagome into a demon... hellhound and how she lost/gained cntroll. I opnly wish you would write/type up a small lil thing about her seeing her family and showing off her chil... children adopted and biological. i would love to see how you have her mom react!
kitty- Sat 23 Sep 2006
OMG O.O I WUV UR ENDING, It almost made me cry!!! so sweet!! I love it! wonderful story!
Lovely fanfic. 3 Though you have major grammar problems. O_o may I suggest a beta reader? ^ ^ Nice plt, it was real nice, very good descriptive.
-yuya-sama
Tomo-maru- Wed 31 May 2006
I have one thing to say HELL YES THAT WAS SO FREAKING AWSOME!!!!!!!!!! AND BY THE WAY i LOVE THAT SYTHE!!! can I have it?
Can't wait to see more that battle was SWEETTTTT!!!!!!
Ja ney Tomo-maru
Tomo-maru- Wed 31 May 2006
hello my name is Tomo-maru. All i have to say is that you are a very skilled writer and i like what you have done so far. i can voice for my twin and I that we enjoy reading fics about kagome and sesshomaru and her being a demon. i haven't put any of my fanfics here yet but I'm putting some on Fanfiction.net if you want to see. There is some me and my twin Aki-kawa wrote called Seven Seas,Time Never Forgotten But Never Remembered,Moonlight by Daylight and someothers i can't remember at this moment. In our fics the pairings are always Kagome and Sesshomaru, Kenshin and Tomoe,Miroku and Sango, Bankoutsu and Chiyome that Aki-kawa made up. Also I am seeing a light on Kikiyo.Kikiyo and Inuyasha I'm just going to tell you right now I DETEST! Kauru with a vengence I don't know why though maybe because of her perkyness hey look now i know why I don't like her same with Boton TO MUCH PERKY!!!! ok now that i got that out of my system usally we have kagome as a dogdemon/goddess Usally as the daughter of Poseiden and mother earth or Ares and a goddess of fire. Tomoe on the other hand would be a wolfdemon/goddess always the daughter of Poseidon and Mother earth. She would either be sister or cousin of Kagome the more sensible one of the two she holds the balance she carries the Yin/Yang blades two katanas alone dangerous but together can bring the world to her feet. Ruler over all elements bound to earth now on to kenshin see he would be the older brother of kouga a wolf demon and ruler of the east Kags the north Tomoe the south and you can only guess who rules the west. As you can geuss I love mythology with a passion. If you go to www.FanFiction.net and go to serch and type in Aki-kawa for author you should find my twins name and mine as well Tomo-maru sorry to keep you from working my sinceriest aplogies
~Tomo-maru~
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