Hmm ... quite entertaining, though they were both a little *too* OOC for me. Sesshomaru's the "perfect" demon. He can't be stopped by barriers, and Kagome can't hurt him with her powers. He catches her arrows in the air without even singeing his fingertips. Also: *she doged a bullet because she *heard* the shot*!? Just a little overboard with granting her superhuman powers, I think. Otherwise, though, this wasn't too bad.
serasvictoria666- Sat 25 Aug 2007
Your story was so amazing! I completely loved it! ^-^
What a good ending! I am pleased with the way Naraku went to the next world; but I thought for sure you would let Inuyasha and Sesshomaru go get ther swords just in case. Anyway great story and I hope you write another one soon!
michelle- Mon 08 Jan 2007
cool!!!!!!!i'm kinda sad this fic's come to an end already!it's such a great read!
definitely is the kind of fic i'll re-read again and again!and i really like how you portrayed sesshoumaru!i think you've done a wonderful job with this fic and the epilogue left me sighing wistfully and wishing i was kagome(who doesn't?)!!!!! (and i'm doing that again!!)
TAJE- Wed 13 Dec 2006
First let me say, I love the ring bit. So cool. I enjoyed this story. Kagome kill me when she's has a brash nature. I love to see when Sesshomaru is written out of character. You did a wonderful job with this story. Keep up the good work!
Kagome093- Thu 14 Sep 2006
are you kidding I LOVED the kissing scene it was the best by far you did an amazing job it was incrdibly hot, Im honestly just bummed you arent doing a lemon you would probably do an amazing job, but since I havent read the entire story yet so Im HOPING there is still a lime later onIm seriously just giving you a perfect 10 cause you honestly deserve it and I am glad you answer your reviews please dont put so much time on it cause its starting to seem that half of the story is reviews an honerable mention is more than enough
Tsuki Doriimaa- Thu 24 Aug 2006
::sighs happily:: Oh I love it. ::chuckles smiling:: You're awesome hun! Please keep writing stories, I love reading what you put out! It's great! welps, off to another story then, until your other is updated. ::grins:: Blessed Be in all your writing endevors deary! JA!
Jordan- Mon 08 May 2006
I really liked this fanfic! Good job with the characters and with the lemon :wink, wink: =) Keep up the good work!
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