MARVELOUS! SIMPLY MARVELOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was so good that I to read it in one siting. but I must say, I was hoping for another lemon at the end. XD oh one thing, in i think it was the last chapter and the first part of the epilogue, instead of quotations and apostraphies there are question marks. I didn't know if you did this on purpose or not, bu I thought I would point it out since it was rather confusing to read that way.

hey love the story so far but i do have one suggestion. u dont have to put the meanings for everything in paraenthesis. most people who read fanficiton already know most of that stuff. if u want to put meanings put them in a list at the bottom. that way if someone doesnt know te meaning they can look it up at the bottom ut it doesnt distract others from the story. XD ok, now im gonna go finish the story. XD

This was a really good story. There was not enough lemony goodness for my taste, but made up for it with the dead and then alive action to keep my hentai mind occupied >.
You are very talented when it comes to twists and turns in plot. It is refreshing. ^.^ I hope that some day you will become more daring with your plot and with your scene description and content. Sometime the flow of it was a little wacky. Oh and grammer in your last two chapters... there were a lot of ? used for quotation marks and " marks. But all in all one of the best- non lemon- romance stories I have read. *hands over bouquet of flowers* yea! XD

WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?!? I'm so confused............. Can you explain the last few chappies to me? I got so lost it's not even funny.