Suicide- Sat 04 Aug 2007
I'm ecstatic to see the story progressing so far and also sorry to have no reviewed sooner. The secrecy and sorrow between their pasts are enchanting, and though their relationship right now seems forced and mainly physical, they're beginning to communicate with each other. Sesshoumaru's character is beautifully portrayed and I so appreciate that.
All and all, this is a wonderful story and I hope you all the success.

Libertine- Fri 03 Aug 2007
I'm ashamed of myself! Not reviewing for not only one but two chapters, and what wonderful chapters they are. I'm warning you now to make it up this is going to be a long one for both chapters, sort of like my apology. Is Inuyasha really just going to go to New York? To let his brother get the best of him?To live a monotonous life with a woman he truly doesn't love, and left to wonder about his brother and Kagome and what could of been had he not acted as a coward? That doesn't sound like the brash hanyou you made him out to be. Then theres Kagome almost compleatly ignorant in many things, including Inuyashas unrequited affections, maybe she chooses to remain unaware? You pay copius amounts of attention to detail in this story and it shows, even in the first paragraph of the 9th chapter, describing her outfit. By the way did you style it after something you've seen or own, or was it a product of you're imagination? I never thought Kagome would have been a child with an affinity to frogs. It reminded me of when I was a child at my friends cottage we would catch them in the pond and make 'froggie habitats' in her backyard lol. It must be bad for Kagome, it seems to me that Sesshoumaru expects her to love him just because of her past life, I wonder if she feels it too, him expecting something from her, something that isn't given so freely on either of their parts, doesn't it confuse her how such a cold and seemingly heartless man could confess his love so quickly, shouldn't the alarm bells be ringing? Well anyways, update and I promise I'll review quickly, scouts honour.

Tammy the First- Tue 31 Jul 2007
Damn it all! First chapie and I must say that out of all the reason I have heard for Sessho-maru-tono to be cold that is the BEST one. I cried, ok, I funking cried.

BeautifulDeception- Tue 31 Jul 2007
Dont Worry About It U Weren't Patronizing Or Anything ... Its Cool ... I Was Just Overly Happy About It ... Well It Seems As If Kagome Is Coming Around ... I Like How She Was Angered At Sesshomaru And I Also Liked How She Acted When He Asked Her About Her Past ... It Sucks That Sesshomaru Doesn't Want To Notice The Fact That Inuyasha Was Falling In Love Wit Kagome, But I Guess It Was Needed For The Story ... Anyways Good Chapter Me Like ... Awww No More Bugatti I Like That Car!!!

TONI- Tue 31 Jul 2007
OMG! U R ONE VERY TALENTED WRITER! LOVE THIS WEIRD YET FASCINATED STORY!!! UPDATE SOON PLZ

Valire18- Tue 24 Jul 2007
I know you get this alot but will you be continuing with Kizu. I remember that story and it was absolutly undoubtably the best story i've ever read on this site. I felt so many emotions saw so many pictures in my head from this story exspecially the cicada and grasshopper scene, or when she was forced to cut off all the heads of the soldiers. The slow love tangle brewing between her sess, and Fujita. I was sorely disappointed when it wasn't updated. I wish i could write like you your amazing ther aren't many people on here with undeniable talent.

Valire18- Tue 24 Jul 2007
I can't believe how great of a writer you are. I felt the tension back in chapter 7 were inu and sess where fighting. I felt like i was almost there. The feelings of sess longing to be with her and his feelings of loss. Its so apperant with his "Shut up" line. I could feel him losing his sense of self with longing to be with his dead love. I can feel Kagome's in the moment of things. Where she's feeling that she doesn't love him but wants to so badly. Its a sad how they will eventually fall apart for trying not to feeling the emptiness of being lonly. How come you haven't put Kikyo in the picture yet or Sango. I'm not really sure if Inu is really in love he never talks about her. You've introduced Miroku but not Sango are you not going for any minor character roles. I didn't read any of your reponses to questions so forgive me if i'm repeating them. But I loved your story Oden shop and I'm liking this story. The intensity in both can relate with me not wanting to be lonely. But i'm wondering how your gonna pull it off with them getting together. His admission to his true feelings for her. Just let me know when you update. Don't wait to long. Schools starting back soon.

Fluffy- Sun 22 Jul 2007
aw... Poor Kagome. Everywhere she goes she's always being compared to someone else. -le sigh- That was a great chapter! I can't wait for you to update!!

BeautifulDeception- Sat 21 Jul 2007
I Must Say Kagome Is The Denses Person I Know ... Inuyasha Keeps Dropping HintAfter Hint And She Still Doesnt Get It!!! Poor Inuyasha ... He's Fallen In Love With Her And Sesshomaru Has Taken Her Away For His VERY Selfish Reasons ... Well I Must Say I Am Really Happy I Make U Proud ... Makes Me Happy Coming From Someone I Dont Know ... Well I Will See What Happens Next Update ... Goodbye!

Kai- Mon 16 Jul 2007
Oh ho ho! Sesshoumaru shouldn't have checked her voicemail, but then again, it's Sehsoumaru we're talking about here. He's going to be one possessive person, just like Kouga or is that quality not used in this story? Oh well, anyways, I can't wait for more to come. Inu Yasha better fix things right. Or anyone for that matter. T^T

Kohana- Sun 15 Jul 2007
Something tells my Sesshoumaru is going to be in trouble!!

Libertine- Sun 15 Jul 2007
This new chapter is wonderful. The way they go about starting their relationship is almost comical, to me at least. They sit down and discuss every aspect of it, such a Sesshomaru thing to do always assessing everything. If Inuyasha has feelings for Kagome then when he finds out about her and Sesshomaru's relationship will he not get jelous and try to sabatoge it? Will he accept it or will he trade Kikyo in breaking two girls hearts in the process. As I'm sure if Kagome finds out she is just a replacement never as good as the first her fragile heart will break even more. This story is touching the way you delve into the relationships of the characters. Well I think thats enough ;) Just one more thing, I look forward to the next chapter.

TONI- Sun 15 Jul 2007
VERY SMOOTH SESSHOUMARU!!

BeautifulDeception- Sun 15 Jul 2007
Sesshomaru Should Take His Own Advice And Stop Comparing Others ... Goodness ... How Can He Do That ... She Is Going To Find Out Sooner Or Later And Poor Kouga I Feel Terribly Sorry For Him And His Situation ... Well Update Soon Please ... Oh And About What U Sad In The 2nd To The Last Chapter ... Thanks Gald To Know I Made U Proud!

Libertine- Mon 09 Jul 2007
I adore this story. I teared up during the first chapter when Sesshoumaru lost Kameko, the dialogue was beautiful. All the drama in the story does a reader good. Update soon?

Vicchonn- Wed 04 Jul 2007
Good chapter. I just stumbled upon this site a few weeks ago, and your story really caught my attention.

I like your style because it's vague, in the sense that it makes the reader wonder and guess more often than not. Of course, sometimes it gets confusing; nevertheless, after a while, things get clarified to some extent.

Keep writing, and ignore flames and bad comments. Honestly, your story is one of the very few in the Inuyasha fandom that is good, quite well written, and interesting enough to, well, be read (I don't want to sound condescending, but really, sometimes, some stories make me want to weep).
Regards,
Vic

Vicious Grin- Wed 04 Jul 2007
wow. this is an awesome story! different from all the other ones out there, which is what I've been looking for for a long time. :D
kudos! for triggering an emotion I wasn't even aware I had... I don't even know how to describe it. scary, ne?

Kai- Tue 03 Jul 2007
OMG! I loved it! I'm hooked! I was so glad to have seen thatyou updated with another chapter. I think I just piddled my pants. Wait- nope. I'm clear. You better be lucky. XP I can't wait for more. It's just-so good!!!!!! :DDDDDDD

Fluffy-Kins- Tue 03 Jul 2007
WoW!! It's been soooo long since you've updated! But you never cease to impress! Kagome can be so naughty sometimes... using other people's cars is a no-no. (you know what they say; never loan anyone your car,your money or your husband... Did you hear that Sesshoumaru? O.O) Anyway great chapter!! I can't wait for your next update!!

Kai- Mon 25 Jun 2007
OMG. I'm falling in love with this story already. I hope something doesn't go as horribly wrong as I'm thinking right now when they look back on what they did. I can't believe a car can do that to someone. Maybe I should try it out somehow. XD I love the setup of their characters and I hope what Kaede was saying isn't true. But it was some good foreshadowing that cannot be overlooked. I can't wait for the next chapters! ^_^

Tsunami Kitsune- Mon 25 Jun 2007
first of all this sound's very simmalar to incomplete if you ask me, by reading the summery that is the thought that came into my head

whiteinu1- Sun 24 Jun 2007
keep going ^_^

BeautifulDeception- Sat 23 Jun 2007
Soooo I Love This Chapter ... Hmmm The Whole Car Thing Got My Heart Bumping ... I Soo Wanna Take A Ride Like That On The Autobahn In Germany!

lady fairy goth- Sat 23 Jun 2007
love your story and you update pretty fast for the amount of words that you write in it hope you keep up the good work

BeautifulDeception- Sun 17 Jun 2007
This Is By Far One Of The Most Emotional Stories I Have Ever Read ... But I Must Say That I Really Like This Story And Usually Im Not In To Really Emotional Stories Because They Make Me Cry And Think About Things In The Past ... Anyways I Love How U Ended The Last Chapter That Was Really Funny ... How Are You Going To Try To Save Someones Life And Then Tell Ur Boss Well I Cant Go Back To Work Because I Want To Go Do Something Like Get Ice Cream ... That Was Funny ... Well Update Soon Pwease And Thank You!

Drianax- Sun 17 Jun 2007
Oh, wow! When I saw that you had updated this story after so long an absence, I was estatic! Please continue updating! When will Kikyo enter the story? And the rest of the characters? Anyway, good to see this story again! Update soon!

Suicide- Tue 23 Jan 2007
This story is an enigma, which I love by the way. I absolutely adore the way you write. Please update soon.

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