This was sooo good i cryed during the last chapter it was soooooo sad i want to thank you for writeing this it was really good

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Hey yokoshima sama,
I thought that your fic was great! I hope you write more like it. I don't mean a sequel, I mean something that reseambles this fic. Well, I've got to go. Bye!!
Kailah

I loved your story I wouldn't change a thing about it. When I started to read it I didn't want to stop I wanted to know what happend next throught the whole thing. And if you write a story about yourself and your life well then go right ahead I would love to read it just let me know when its up. Ok. By the way I would have to say that your the best author I have seen yet your story was kept me on edge. I would rate this a 100. Thanks for the great story.

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uNliKing tHaT nAmE iT maKes mE

hmm...ANGRY? soRRY!! dOnt hATe

mE! wEll...I kiNda lIkiNg ur Story

s0 g00d j0b!!

Geesh! They only liked what you wrote and were asking; as for me I wouldn't bother with a sequel because it was good [like an okay cereal that fills you but tastes bland] but not good neough to warrant a continuation. If I were you I would feel honored people even thought it worthy of a sequel and have replied politely-not rudely. As it stands, the story was okay, the chapters VERY short, and the intro and ending crap where you give excuses and such was almost longer than the story at times. I wonder how you could write such SHORT chapters-this explains why you have 40...I met real writers that have even more [60 or past 100] and sometimes they even had 14 pages per chapter but either way ALWAYS more than half or one page! The story was trite be glad its over with and move on. As for me, I need to finish my breakfast which tastes like your story...tepid and dull.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?