Aaaawwww... that made me want to cry.
Trinity- Mon 10 Jul 2006
Hello. ^^ I actually read this story a really long time ago, it was one of the first one shots I ever read and I loved it. I've always loved this story, but I just decided to actually send a review today. Sorry it took me so long. lol ^^; Anyway there are a lot of things I loved about this story, the way you managed to somehow make each of the seasons remind Sesshoumaru about Kagome was actually, in my opinion anyways, very well done. ^-^ I loved how you had a little experience for each season, like them getting into a snowball fight in Winter or her braiding leaves in his hair in the Fall. And I loved the words you used to describe everything, it really painted a picture in my mind. Especially the end, I'm not afraid to admit it, I cried I little at the end lol. ^^; It was just so sad, but it was only that way because very well written. Normally I don't like shorter one shots because people who write them are either illiterate or they don't know how to end it right; you did neither. Actually I liked the length of your story, it was short, sweet, and too the point, there wasn't any mindless rambling to try and make it longer.. You wrote what you wanted to write and then ended it, and to me, it was the perfect length. Another thing I liked about it was the title, yes it sounds a bit silly, but I really liked it. 'Where Is She?' The thing that made it so cool was how it was repeated in the story. It's funny because there are some things where you just sorta thing 'Kagome' or you think 'Sesshoumaru', but it's really hard to make it where four things are all for one person. Like, a lot of people when they think Winter, think Sesshoumaru because he's so cold and what-not, but you made it easily seem as though it could remind you of Kagome. And I know I already said it, but I have to say it again for emphasis lol. I positively loved your descriptive use of language and imagery concerning the different seasons and Kagome and Sesshoumaru's experiences in them.. ^^ Especially just the seasons themselves. Because it was all realistic, it really was how they are, and all the experiences the two had were so normal yet so seemingly unique and sweet. It was.. Strange, but it a cool way. ^^ Well I've blathered on for long enough so I'll end this, but like I said I love the fanfic, and sorry again for taking so long to write a review, but I thought that you had probably already gotten a billion reviews so you wouldn't care about one stupid one. Still I couldn't help wanting to write it if only to tell you what a good writer you are and how your fanfiction, being one of the first I ever read, was one of the ones that first got me into the Sesshoumaru/Kagome pairing and one of my first inspirations as a writer. So thank you, for writing the fanfic, and for (hopefully lol) reading this boring, gushy, review. ^-^
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