IT FRICKEN ROCKED!!!!! Lol! That was an amazing fanfiction and not the first that I have read by you!

You are truelly a gifted writer and need to keep up the good work.... If only to please adoring fans like me that literally hang on your every word!!!! Thanks for the awesome read!!!!

Savvy

Amazing!!!!!!! Phenomenal!!!!!! Beautiful!!!! OMG dat r not enough words or even the right words to describe this amazing fanfic!!!!!!!

Holy crap...I could not stop reading this. Such a great story! I especially like the part near the ending where the web of good guys/bad guys/spouses gets so interconnected. If you planned to do that, Amazing job. If it just happened, still a frickin' amazing job. I enjoy all of you stories and you are one of my favorite writers. Keep up the good work!

This was a completely incredible fanfic..... I was up all night reading it because it was sooo riveting, just wanna say thanks for the fic and keep writing.....

Wow. Do you know how many times I read this story??? I read it so much time, but I was just lazy to review. :D I love this story. I love it. I love it. I love it.

Are you going to write lemons between Kagome and Conner - and that other demon guy - from your other story???

I'll be waiting!

Oooo; very nice ending. It was interesting and funny. Hope you write again soon!

Wow. I'm speachless. In a good way though.

That was great, you should totally continue with a sequal. i loved it.

What a good story! I have also read some of your fanfics on ffnet and I have never been disappointed! Keep up the good work as this was an amazing story!

i would like to let you know that i found a term mistake> prick-means a gay penis so i wouldn't use that trem when sesshomaru is making love to kagome but other than that i love thi fic!

hahaha that was a good story... karma really is a bitch isnt it :P

that was an extremely well written fanfic...i thoroughly enjoyed it. i was a bit surprised that you used Hojo as the close associate of Sesshoumaru, the majority of the kag/sess fanfics i read have Miroku as the close associate. it was a nice alternative, and i really enjoyed the fanfic as a whole. good show.

That was one of the most funnies FF I have ever read. Thank You so much for that. I really loved it.

great story

This story was amazing! I read all of it today (man did that take a while!!!) and i was so happy with it, i was crying and smiling and clapping at the same time!!! This story was brilliant, just like your others, and i can't wait for your next piece of art!!!

~Sandreline

you are the only person i ever known to finish a story and i am greatful for that, so keep writen ccause your stories are the best on here to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow...that was a really good story. About a year ago, I read your story "The legend of the Blue Wolf" on animespiral, and it was one of the better Inuyasha fanfics that i've ever read...and i dont even really like Kouga/Kagome pairings. But one day i went back to read another one of your stories and i couldnt find your account...or your stories were deleted...one of those. idk, well anyways you were gone out of my life and i was sad....but back on subject.
When I first started reading this story I was confused because it seemed as though I had read it before, but I know i hadn't read any ses/kag pairings by you and definately none where Hojo wasn't an extremely slow and stupid person. It turns out that the story "The Assistant" by I think kibasin on fanfiction.net wrote a story that was 'dedicated' to you. but really, she used a bit too many of your details. I seriously thought that i had read this story before because she used so many of your details. Isn't Nazuna one of your original characters? Because she used her too. but anyways, i read her memo about you reading her story and if you approve i approve...and besides...that was a looooooooooooooong time ago. well this was unusually long and i thank you for writing such a wonderful story.
paige

Oh, and Kouga really is turning out to be really overbearing-I like him, but he seems to want to control everthing, especially in chapter 10.

I like this chapter, except at how weak Kagome is turing out to be. Sure, she pulls herself together, and talks back on her own behalf, but then all of the guys just come running (Kouga, Hojo, and Sesshomaru) and start threatening and kind of nullifying Kagome and her own self reliance. It is a bit much-it would be fine if it wasn't used quite so much.

you are a write after my own heart i just love what u did to kikyo she is such a bitch anyway love ur story

Great chapter-stupid Kikyou

"He sighed, feeling sorry for himself, and allowed sleep to slowly claim him. His last thought was about how Kagome should feel grateful to him for dumping her. Because of him, she was able to meet Kouga Makasuno, and it was clear that Makasuno liked her. What an ungrateful bitch."

--He has a very strange sense of logic, and his definition of good and bad seems to be a bit skewed.

Naraku-icky, but not quite so bad in this fic. (He isn't the ultimate bad guy-)



I loved this chapter!!Yay! Kikyou is finally getting what she deserves~

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“Kagura is none of your concern. Focus your attention on your own date, Makasuno.” He said, the warning tone of his voice telling Kouga to back off quickly or face the consequences"--

--Someone is a major hypocryite. I loved this little scene.

Also, I really dislike Kagura, and normally I would be saying "Yeah, that whore deserves it," but this time, I think she's just stupid, and not really at fault. Sesshomaru knows that she is infatuated with him, and to ask her out like this just to get revenge on someone else is just evil.

"“Kagome. How are you this evening?” Hojo asked, wrapping his arms around the small form of his first and true love."

--This line makes me sad for Hojo's fiancee. She will never (Well, she might, eventually) hold Hojo's love and attention the way Kagome once did/does.

Okay, you know how earlier in this review I felt bad for Kagura? Well, that has quickly diminished and turned back to disgust at what she said near the end of chapter 5 (Biting Back). "Even twits deserve happieness" and just being a drunk bitch. UGH!

Great chapter.

"He could not help but smirk at Kagome’s angry outburst and wondered if she were that amusing when she was pissed, would she be even more so if she were furious. He would have to find out, but he would not use Inu Yasha as a weapon against her ever again."

--Aww! He has Some scruples, at least.

Great chapter.

"Sesshomaru stared at the phone in his hand. Oh, how he hated that little bastard."-That was funny! Loved that line.

Gotta go.

That was wonderful! I loved this-especially how Kagome didn't realize until afterwords what Inuyasha was doing-how he dumped her. I mean, I love a strong Kagome, but that wouldn't have fit in this story

(And, plus, it always seems to be the woman who realized her mistake in choosing the dud, and dumps him at the alter. I liked this twist. It left me hating Inuyasha so much more)


Also, interesting twist to have Sesshomaru dating Kikyou. Very icky, very interesting.

Great chapter

YAY!! I finished reading it. OMG is it awesome. I know that i say this in every single fic I've read of yours but there is nothing else to say because nothing else aside from perfection even comes close WTG!!!!!

that was an amazing story! i have to say you have outdone yourself! i am in love with your writing and will tell all my friends to read your work because you, love, are an amazing writter. i do hope you continue your work. i love you!!! ^^ keep up the amazing work!

brilliant story!!! one of the best fanfictions I've ever read. the story was very captivating and the characters' personalities were relatively accurate!!! One of the best modern version stories yet!! keep up the good work i look forward to your future work!!!

Lovely story. I rarely review, so consider yourself lucky. I'm also not usually a fan of modern age S/K stories, but you changed my mind. You managed to place all the characters in very believable and well thought out roles (kudos on Kikyo), and stayed true to their dispositions. It took me quite a while to get though, but it was so worth it. A very well written story, you should be proud of yourself. Looking foward to reading more of your works.

HEY! That was, yet again, another awsome story! I loved it! I have one more story to read of yours. So get ready to have yet, another reveiw by the always annoying me!:D Ok! I did like this story. I like how Kikyou and inuyasha were seperat from the rest...and yet tied in. I loved how Sesshomaru lost his mask and was showing his fear and love the second time he was at the hospital. I would have liked to have been able to read more about his reaction to when he came home and found out she was missing. Sometimes he was too much of an ass. I mean it kind of made me angry..but then made me think that well, that is the reality of the issue. IThat's why i like your stories. They have a sense of fairy tail...but are always realistic. Many people stray from that. (myself included) We want to think that they will just fall in love and not question it. But i like how you make it. I also liked how you didn't have sesshomaru just start smiling and laughing and showing all of his emotions so sudenly. You didn't make a big deal about it, but you showed him slowly breaking through his armor. And it was sudle. I love it. ok. sorry for the spelling errors and such. I am moving onwards to read one of your other stories. wish me luck!

A little slow and disbelieving in some places, but you came through in the end. Altogether it was a good story. I like how lengthy it was, instead of throwing them altogether and making them rush their relationship. Good job.

Hi! wow I live your fanfic, is really good you should write a lot more... And well the only thing that I would suggest is that when you do write another fanfic about sesshy/kagome dont talk about kouga that much is kind of wierd that he got to be a big part of the story up until the middle of the story. Well other than that I congratulate you on this succcess and would loveif you actually send me some other stories about sesshy/kagome I would love it!!! THANK YOU ^_^

P.S.Ummm, well please write me an e-mail thanx...

Hey KougasAngel! I loveeeeeeeeee this story!!!I just wanted to point something out to you real quick!

Kagome told Ayame that she had finally lost her virginity. She thought that Ayame would scold her, but instead, Ayame said, “Well, it is about damn time. So, who is the lucky stud?”

Kagome giggled. “Sesshomaru Taisho. I am kind of living with him now. And, that is one of the reasons why I am calling. I want to invite you over to have dinner sometime this week. I am going to be inviting another friend and want you two to meet.” She explained.


You used Taisho instead of Takashiro. I just figured I'd let you know!

Meagan