I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
sappy endings police- Sun 17 Dec 2006
"You complete me". This is a warning. Please refrain from making sappy fanfictions with a bad plot, and even worse character faithfulness. To your credit, the idea was great. Put Kags and Sess in a bed together and let the sparks fly. But nothing happned. How can those two even be together when nothing about this fic makes any logical sense. They spent two, count it, two nights together. That's not enough for me to even believe they could fall in love that quickly, and trust me I'm all for love at first sight. You're writting style is very fresh and it reads very well, just put a little more thought into what your writting next time.
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