Hey I loved your story, but I was wondering something I'm makeing my own story and I hope that maybe you could help with the names since you made I lot of neat ones thanks

I must say this is my favorite so far. And in one of the chappies your used One of Inuyasha's attack and its called Iron revier Soul Stealer, not what ever it was you called it , It was around mid night when I read that chapter, I almost didn't go to bed in want of finishing it but my mama said i had too. You are a really good writer my friends have said I can create good storys, which I now thats true because i'm second best in the reading/writing f-cat in the duval county districk, I can TELL fiction storys, But for some reason when I WRITE them they don't seem to flow the way I want them too, which frustrartes me and makes me a tinsy bit...Violent....with my...poor,poor...ComputerX-X.
Its a curse sadly. well don't let life get you down that s what I sat.

Too many periods it makes it seem that you can't write a story. Overall great story Less periods.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

i love your story and espcially the last paragraph in the last chapter. i also love your other story Fangs of a Vampire both are done very well.