I could have sworn this story involved a lemon but...I guess not. Oh well--it was amazing nonetheless! In character, Kagome didn't have the stupid, new, plot-bunny power crap and they were all in character--AMAZING!!! >.

i really enjoyed this fic. i loved the details that you had in it. with them i had a very will mental picture as i read. thank you for creating such a fine piece of writing. i hope this continues to be more than a one shot because it would be amazing. thanx again.
KB

Hmm ... not bad, though I don't think it qualifies as "canon universe", the way it's labelled. After all, in canon, Sesshomaru ends up healing himself, and he is also the next best thing to immune to holy powers, so Kagome would never had been able to "control" his youkai. Nevertheless, this is nicely written and quite entertaining, if not that believable. It probably would have been better under "alternate universe".

I loved this story.. but two things felt really off about it lol

One, the accidental sit command in the sentence that someone else previously mentioned - Kagome has accidentally sat him before in the series and I was somewhat shocked that it was overlooked there.

And two... it wasn't just left "slightly open" as someone else mentioned - it felt abruptly halted and entirely open lol I was actually really shocked when I went to go to the next chapter absentmindedly and found out there was none.

So... one minor oopsie and a one-shot gone wild... otherwise it was entirely enjoyable.

The characterization was good, it was a well-written piece, and flowed very well until it's abrupt end. I do wish you'd write more! :-)

I wish you would seriously consider turning this into a complete story. It has very good potential.

Dear CiraArana
I hope you find it in your busy schedule to help out your poor reader and continue this fic. It's very lovely and well written, now if only there was more. I was sad to seen the end.
Yours Truly
Aki-kawa

Ilove the the stroy write more!Q!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ilove the the stroy write more!Q!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really enjoyed this, it was amazing. and to be honest.. I think you could do a sequel or something. You left it open slightly at the end, so maybe give it a try.. but there's no need to...
Well it was a very enjoyable read, thanks.
J.C

Your horoscope was definitely right. This was very good! I would have loved to see this as more than a one-shot. Once you've finished your other stories, you could always continue this one. I, for one, would read it. :D

Hey i liked this fic very much. Let's hope I remember which fic out of the billion I read was this one and remember to come back when it's updted!

loved it. pleeeease write another chapter. this deserves to be more than just a one-shot.

i hope you can develop this into a complete story it has a lot of potential

I think you should continue the story. It would be so COOL!

So, is there a sequel to it, even if it's only one more chapter? After all, I would love to see how Sesshoumaru decides to repay the debt he feels he owes her now.

Yes, your horoscope was right.... I never thought I'd say That. *makes a face* I still enjoy this. Thanks for writing it.

hey u know what.. i think ur horoscope was right.. i enjoyed reading it.. why not continue it?! continue
continue
continue

Loved it. You had Sesshomaru down to a t (whay do we say to a t... why not q?) You had his personality down to a q. Bravo. Only one thing. And I don't normally bring up mistakes..or even notice them. But this one I caught and it sunk under my skin:

“Oh, shut up, Inuyasha!” she snapped. “Don’t make me sit you again! I’ll tell you everything, but later! First I want to get back and change dress. Now, will you please lead the way?”

Inuyasha stared at her and she stared back. Miroku sighed. Finally Inuyasha snorted and turned away.

He didn't fall when she said "sit" in the sentence. See ya

This was good. I hope you would continue this story.

It's a wonderful story, but very short. I hope you'll decide in future to continue this one-shot and made it another beautiful novel.
Best regards,
Mirra.

Yes your horoscope was right.
;P

Yes your horoscope was right.
;P

Oh lovely! This was thrilling, wonderful and just what I was hoping for when I came to the annual ASS awards looking for a good, strong dose of Sesshoumaru. Thanks so much for writing this. I can't thank you enough (and Passion is great too. :)

Good start! Hope you continue writing the story.