I'm on chapter 11, it would have been nice to see some rebuilding of trust between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Its more like him making demands and her just blissfully following. I guess I'm saying that it would have showed some growth on Sesshoumaru's part. Anyhow, its still a good story, good job.
You're one of my classics in my list though your story setting is contemporary. You're actually one of the authors of my way back when I was still a reader/lurker that inspired me to write.. Thank you! It was a fun read. =D
jessica- Sat 22 Mar 2008
omg awesome fic i loved it so much you did it wow just wow loved it
TheMikoShivae- Mon 11 Feb 2008
Loved it!! *dies*
laura- Mon 31 Dec 2007
that was a really good story. really cute, although the way they were acting in college was very reminiscent of high school for me. i know it wasn't meant to be that way, but it kinda was, made me a little home sick but still. a awesome story none-the-less
gradualwisd0m- Thu 29 Nov 2007
Wonderful! I absolutely loved it!
Queenie- Fri 26 Oct 2007
my eyes getting damaged by the computer screen for the whole night was damn worth reading this story!!!!! i loved how its written, it doesn't sound corny like some other fics, thats what kept me hooked to this story! you're a wonderful writer :] keep up the great work!
Alyssa- Mon 22 Oct 2007
Hi!
I just wanted to say that, even though this story was finished around a year ago, I still have read it about 4-5 times. It is one of my favourite's on this site. Since I don't review much, I thought I'd let you know :)
I can't wait for you to update Brother!
Thanks for the great read!
Alyssa
Sapphire- Sun 14 Oct 2007
I read most of your stories repeatedly and I love every bit of them. :) Keep up the excellent work! Please update your non-complete ones on here and AFF please and thank you. :) I absolutely adore them! :D I - probably the others too - can't seem to get enough of them!! :D:D
Marille- Mon 01 Oct 2007
You're a good writer but I just couldn't finish this story. By the start of chapter 10 I felt physically sickened by what was happening. You turned Kagome into something worse then a doormat. She was the crud underneath it. As for the demon inside her. well, frankly, it needs to be put down. How patheticly worthless is it? After all that happened it should have been screaming for justice. Was the demon so pathetic of a creation to just accept all that hapened? Hell, it should have had Sess crawling on his belly in front of an audience begging for forgiveness. He is what it wanted as a father to her pup? Need or not, it should have been disgusted with him and he made to prove his worth to her.
Yes, you may be a good writer, but this felt like more of a poor excuse to write about abuse and Kagome being under the thumb. Nothing to do with the actual characters of Inuyasha.
kesha- Sun 23 Sep 2007
write a sequel pleaseee this is the best story of my life Thank Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu but the twins are teens in keiya is getting in trouble with boys
kesha- Sun 23 Sep 2007
write a sequel pleaseee this is the best story of my life Thank Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Peaches- Mon 17 Sep 2007
Hey i finally got to read the last of this story. I didn't knw that you have been updating on here. I was always looking for it on ff.net , But u have already been told of the story on there. I am just glad that i had finally got to finish reading it. I love your storys , and i can't wait til my brothers keepers is finish to.
Denise Perez- Sat 15 Sep 2007
Hi. All I can say its bravo for your fanfic. marvelous tale of a hate turned to love. I read it twicw and i cried and I laughed. A SesKag Masterpiece.
Im from Puerto Rico and in my language all I can say is estupendo
(outsatnding in spanish Youre an Inspiration
Denise
Neigel_Yuwe- Mon 27 Aug 2007
Well.... ILOVE IT.... LOVE IT!!!
from beging to end.. wow.. it such a lovely story.. all emotion has been in this story.. I can't help my self to read it again and again...
you're such a great writter..
umm.. can u make a sequel of the stroy please... please
Great story, thanks for the good read!
Hi KogasAngel!!!
I loved your story I finally finished reading it. I was glad that everything turned out right in the end!!
I hope to read more of your stories soon!!!
Bye!!
al- Mon 16 Apr 2007
the first time i read this story,i thought it was pretty decent.but every time i chose to read it,it seems to get more interesting.
and i'm glad i got a chance to,in case it disappears from this site altogether.
good luck with all your future endeavors.
I don't care what anybody says, your story was good enough for me to read religously for the past two days which is saying alot. Normally I get bored with long stories half-way through the middle. There are only a few stories that have accomplished this, "To Wash It All Away" being one of them. That story is posted on FF.net if your interested. Anyways, long review short, I greatly enjoyed your fic and wish you luck on your other ones.
MidnightTimberWolf- Sat 03 Feb 2007
Wow! Two days it took for me to read tjos story and I loved it... Everybit of it except for the part of someone accusing you..... And anyone who reads your fics knows that you don't cheat or steel anothers wriings. Anyways, This was great beyond great I just couldn't stop reading it.... I give it a ten all the way....until next time.
Smittee- Fri 02 Feb 2007
I truly enjoyed your fanfic. I'm glad that everything worked out so well in the end. At first, I wasn't sure what to think of the story, but I'm glad I kept to reading it. Keep up the good work.
sesshy_pup- Mon 15 Jan 2007
loved the store finished it in 4 days.
i saw that to.....i thought that it was you though...lol anyway im sure tons of people are goin to comment on there and make them take it down.
Jade_fox- Fri 12 Jan 2007
I really love this story. Whilst in the beginning i thought Sess was a real pig i went through the story and really enjoyed it. In fact this is the 3rd time i have read this story. Its been a while that i have been searching for this story and so i was quiet pleasnatly surprised when i saw it in the recent stories section i immediately went to check it and got to enjoy it again (This makes it the 4th read) . *pardon the spelling errors*. Really enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to others. Take care.
Aurora Potter- Fri 12 Jan 2007
OMG!!!!!! That was such a cute story...........I thank you for writing it since reading it really brightend up my day........Thank you
voe- Tue 09 Jan 2007
god i LOVE this story sooo much
=)
i was reading the other one and i read the reviewa and came straight here =)
xoxoox
voe
Embury- Tue 09 Jan 2007
Awesome story. It was well written and very original. I look forward to reading more of your fanfics. Keep up the good work!
hey there!
wow, great fic you have here, i'm glad you're done, i wouldn't have been able to stand the suspenseXD keep on writing=)
anonnie mouse- Sun 07 Jan 2007
Wait... what are your user names on the different sites....it makes it easier to know if it's you or someone copying you...you should probably {if you hadn't already} post on your author profile thingy what your user names on diff fanfic sites are. that way we know sooner and you in turn know sooner about anything fishy!!
Megan Consoer- Sun 07 Jan 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
DemonicDarkWolf- Sun 07 Jan 2007
I still love your fics, and can't wait to see what you come up with next. Have you ever considered having a website so that all of your fics would be in one place? I think I might have asked you that before too.
I've read this story a least 3 times. I love it!! That's why you are listed as one of my favorite authors.
Note:When an author is listed as one of my favorite, I usually read there stories more than 2 times:-)
P.S I 'm sorry someone stole this story-it's VERY upsetting.
Plagiarism Hater- Sun 07 Jan 2007
If you're talking about that stupid kogasangel1 on fanfiction.net (very pathetic since he/she can't even come up with their own pen name) then I'm waaaaay ahead of you sister ; )
emo_dinosaur123- Fri 01 Dec 2006
Omg you have to make a sequal or something to this story......tihs is literaly the best story i have ever read....EVER!!!!!!
mikogirl19- Mon 20 Nov 2006
i love this story. i had read it before but i could never remember the name. this is one of the many stories possibly the top 5 that im in love with. keep on writing. i enjoy reading your stories.
This story so rocks. i could not stop reading it. It just totally blew my mind. It was so believable. WTG I loved it like all of your work.
Sakura- Fri 22 Sep 2006
Awww i wanted to see one last lemon scene with kagome and sess and some more fluff with the new pups. The ending fit well though and i like it, maybe a sequel soetime soon???
Megan Consoer- Sat 19 Aug 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
Aaaahhhh.... *is being slightly sarcastic with -100% insult intention* I loved that story! School KagomexSesshoumaru fanfictions are my favorite and this particular one does that category justice. One of the best I've seen yet! ^.^
lyia- Wed 12 Jul 2006
OMG i love this story i got to say i don't get a review unless i really LOVE the stoyr but MAN...I REALLY LOVE IT um....did u write a squeal huh I WANNA KNOW k ok once agian love the story
What can i say... I love this story... I read it at least once a week.. You have done an excellent job.. On this story ... One of the Three that i read the most..and highly recommended to other readers...
Keep up the excellent writting..
I love how each Character is portrayed in the stories.. Its just awesome what can I say..
Take Care
Mari
Forsaken Faith- Mon 10 Jul 2006
CUTE!!!! I love this story! It made me cry, it made me laugh, it made me angry, it made me yell at my computer, it made me go "awwww",and then it made me yell, "CUTE!!!!" lol. yup. I really loved this story. it was awsome. Very well writen. The ending line ended it well, but it was a bit corny. That's my only problem with this whole story. wow., I usually have so much to say. I loved it, i loved it, i loved it. Great job. It was fantastic. -Forsaken Faith
I really like this story!
I was looking through your profile to reread this story-again. It's like my seventh time I read it. I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I couldn't believe when I saw one person review it-then I remembered what happened. All the chapters are great!!
Megan Consoer- Thu 01 Jun 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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