Hey, I love the story idea! and I can't wait to see what you post next! n_n But, I would like to point out one thing, if you don't mind, (not to be rude, or flaming) I sugest you get a beta-reader. I love this fic and would love to beta it for you.

mk_jillian

So funny, I love it. I can't wait for the bet....update soon!