Fantastic Chapter, can't wait til the next..
Oh about the pet peeve, i can totally relate. i work at Subway on college campus. you would think that college kids go there to get smarter, oh no not at OSU! Not those little wankers. some of the stupidest things come out of their mouths! I just look at them and ask are you sure ur not a frequent short bus rider? i am truly sorry you have to deal with it as well.
Chaos
Jessabella- Sat 24 May 2008
OH, GOD! I think I JUST FRICKEN DIED!
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this bloody story so much it's not even funny!
I am truly not a fannon kind of reader. Slash is my thing. But this, THIS is the BEST BEST BEST het fiction I have ever read and I hope you UPDATE SOON!
*puppy dog pout* *fake tear*
Pweaze?
Lova Mucho,
Jessabella
PLEASE please please update already!!!!!!!!!! lol
tilayha
Ice_Angel- Thu 28 Feb 2008
Luv dis fic! 1 of my faves! Keep up the good work kayz? Already waiting for the next chappy!
Alexis- Sat 29 Dec 2007
UPDATE!!!!!!!
LExi- Sun 02 Dec 2007
update Plesae yura is going to HELL! PLESAE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
LExi- Sun 02 Dec 2007
update Plesae yura is going to HELL! PLESAE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
I thik it's a good story... you had an update list, right? My email is ShydowV@yahoo.com
Kags2- Thu 01 Nov 2007
omg love the story, only one problem.....UPDATE y dont ya **throws stuff around*** i mean gosh you cant just levave a god story hanging :'( but anyway keep up the good writing!!!
me adriana!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1- Sun 28 Oct 2007
hay i bord !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!!!!
Sessys1-n-only- Sat 20 Oct 2007
I love this story! I cant get enough and cant wait for the next drama filled chapter! please update ASAP.
And i completly agree with u on most of your peeves. One Question though....Why do u spell Board, Bored?
poor kagome! great chapter! please update again soon!
pt- Tue 02 Oct 2007
pleasssseeeeeeeeee finish my pet peeve is authors who dont finish there stories
kay- Sat 29 Sep 2007
pleasssssssssssssssssssse write more to teacher's pet that story was the bomb yuo are the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(lol)
IcePrincess001- Wed 26 Sep 2007
That was so terrible, but I can't believe this story can get anymore dramatic, I guess you'll have to prove it to me, anyways your doing wonderfully on it I love the story. Poor Kagome though I hope things will be better in the next chapter. Can't wait to read the next one now.
IcePrincess001- Wed 26 Sep 2007
I love how the story is going. I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed in a while I have three more chapters to read for your story before I'm caught up. Its so beautiful. I've just been busy but I'm getting better at managing my time. Anyways, its wonderful and I really can't wait to read the rest.
That Was a GREAT Chapter. Poor Kagome! Yura Is Going 2 Hell....and Naraku? What the....? He's Phycotic!!!! Wonderful Story!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!
Thanks!!!!
Kagome-Chan ♪
KILL THEM!!! KILL THEM ALL!! The extent of your wickedness knows no bounds!!
tilayha
forgotten beauty- Sat 08 Sep 2007
Interesting, poor Kagome. You sure do put her through a lot of pain. I wasn't expecting Sango to get jealous, though. I thought she was fine with Miroku. Guess not. Anyways, update soon.
laurel- Thu 06 Sep 2007
Love it. Poor Kagome
ceira- Tue 04 Sep 2007
wow. drama drama drama. i hope that sango & kagome patch things up so they can start kicking yura's & kagura's ass. sesshoumaru & kagome better be careful around naraku because he's giving off some obessed, stalking creepy vibes (as if that is anything new). anyways keep them coming & i hope you send me an email letting me know about your next chapter (lllotrfan@yahoo)
sessysbaby666- Mon 03 Sep 2007
while i agree with you that pepole should apolige(spelling?) for bumbing into you in all fairness some people don't even relize that they've run into someone or they're in a hurry to make it through the halls that are so over crowded so that they can make it to their class on time they just don't worry about it.
Tana-san- Mon 03 Sep 2007
I'm really enjoying this fic and I like the new drama. I'm having trouble with Sango's jealousy kick, a real friend wouldn't feel such things. And I do hope you have Yura and her accomplice to the crime pay for what they did. I mean a police record and expellment from school with the possibly of not graduating. That is such a serious crime and should not be taken lightly in any way. I also wanted to tell you I am amused with your pet peeves. It's nice to hear I'm not the only with those thoughts. Jen
Cassie- Sun 02 Sep 2007
Wow this is drastic I mean damn Naraku knows about Sesshomaru and Kagome. I hope he doesn't get Sesshomaru put in jail or worse. Please let Naraku get his ass whooped by Sesshomaru to save Kagome from him. And I hope Sango and Kagome can become friends again and get them bitches Yura and Kagura they deserve a really good ass whooping. In the end why not let Kagome and Sesshomaru get married after she graduate. Really good story can't wait to read the drastic good stuff in the next chapter. ^_____^
Megan Consoer- Sun 02 Sep 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Lady Nya- Sun 02 Sep 2007
That is low even for Yura. Sango! How could she?! I'm glad that Kagome never once thinks that Sesshoumaru doesn't love her when she's talking to Sango. Great chapter. Drama is the climax of a story. It makes the story worth reading. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Hazel- Sun 02 Sep 2007
Sango should be shamed
YURA GOD I HATE THAT BITCH!! She going to get whats coming to her.
flowahpowah- Sun 02 Sep 2007
sorry! i forgot the word "don't" =/
flowahpowah- Sun 02 Sep 2007
great job on the fanfic! please stop.
DreamingPisces- Sun 02 Sep 2007
this was a great chapter! so full of drama! it's hard to believe that the next one has even more drama! great job with the story, you made it worth the long wait just don't make us wait too long again!
PS: i just realized that sesshoumaru's last name is the same name of this really cute character off of Bleach named Toshiro Histsugaiya!
Love The New Chapter ... Aww Poor Kagome She Should So Kick Yura's Ass!!! Hmm Sesshomaru Is About To Lose His Job And Sango Was Just Soo Wrong ... Gah!
Red-Smartiez- Sat 01 Sep 2007
DUDE!!! THAT WAS SOO LOW OF YURA!!!!!
SO MUCH DRAMA!!!!!
PLEASE PLEEEEEEEEASE PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU ^_^
*A-Kay*- Sat 01 Sep 2007
Finally and update. Seems like it's been a centruy...lol.. ok, not that long. Loved it. I'm a big, big, BIG fan of drama so bring it on! haha
Lexy22- Thu 30 Aug 2007
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ REVIEW!!!!!!!
OOO!!! That's my pet peeve too!! I'm black too, so that annoys the hell out of me...thank god I only have one friend like that.... lolz!! Great chapter! I think I know what the drama is going to be, but i'm going to keep my big mouth shut and wait like everyone else.....*bounces in chair* woooooo!!!
Toodles!!
Much Love, PunkrockerX
Just to let you know, Apollo was Artemis's brother. An artery is something similar to a vein.
pretty please update!!!! Will Kagome get pregnant?!!
AWWW!!! that was so sweet PLEASE Update soon!!!!! i can't wait, this is such an awesome fic and your an awesome author! Great Job !!!! update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
JaNe ^_^
ceira- Wed 08 Aug 2007
yea an update! it's been awhile since i last read & reviewed but yeah. anyways please send me an e-mail letting me know when u update (lllotrfan@yahoo.com). and your pet peeve column about tanning, well maybe some ppl want a little color. if they want to be darker then whatever. i dont have to worry about that since im native american. so yeah until next time.
Sorry about that here's the review in spanish again and english.
Spanish: hola WhisperingDreams089, Pienso que su historia es un golpe. Espero que usted consiga tantas revisiones como usted desea para. Y tambien pienso que su espanol
es bastante bueno.
mucho amor
~GEM~
English: hello WhisperingDreams089, I think that this story is a hit. I hope that you obtain as many reviews as you wish. And also I think that your spanish is quite good.
much love
~GEM~
sorry my spanish is better than my english. ^_^
let kagome get pregnant
Adriana Mgalhaes- Wed 25 Jul 2007
i see white hair to, in inu yasha's and Sesshoumaru's hair.
jane, bey!
Adriana Magalhaes- Sat 21 Jul 2007
you missed some words in there. if you send me a message just call me jenna thats what my 3 & 4year old littlefriends call me cuse thay cant say Adriana with an A&D togethere!
AnitaThePapermaster- Fri 20 Jul 2007
YAY! another chapter! glad you updated, please update soon!
skye- Wed 18 Jul 2007
hey love the chapter please up date soon I can't wait to read more
chick_with_innocents- Wed 18 Jul 2007
O MY GOOOOOODDDDDDDNNNNEEEESSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVED IT!!!!!! This WHOLE scene was ABSOLUTLY AMAZING!!!!!!
It was so GREAT!!!!
You are such an AWSOME writer. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Senrath- Wed 18 Jul 2007
I just wanted to say I love your story.
And for me, anything other than "pale as the moon" is tan enough :P
hola WhisperingDreams089, Pienso que su historia es un golpe. Espero que usted consiga tantas revisiones como usted desea para. Y tambien pienso que su espanol es bastante bueno.
mucho amor
~GEM~
ooooooo...lets hope naraku doesnt have cameras with recording abilities in her room. hee hee
and letting them fall asleep naked together that could be BIG trouble!!!
update soon.
tilayha
Lovely Way 2 Make Up. lol. Nice Chapter!!!! Please Update As Soon As U Can!!
Peace, Luv, and Teachers,
Kagome-Chan
Lady Nya- Tue 17 Jul 2007
I totally know what you mean! And then there's the people who tan so much their skin is orange, and they say it's natural! Ugh! Great chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
liz- Tue 17 Jul 2007
i read the story but i dont review but i LOVE it so i was wondering if you could please send me a e-mail when you update thank you my e-mail address is: kagomelovessesho@yahoo.com
Thank you
DreamingPisces- Tue 17 Jul 2007
Chapter 20 was great! i'm very glad that they made up but i bet this only means it's going to get that much harder for them. Still i love this story so please update soon!
PS: I share your pet peeve i just don't get the whole tanning thing and Renee really is pale.
Chaos_Queen77- Tue 17 Jul 2007
OH MY GOD! WOW! Even though it was a shorter chapter it was great, wow! I can not wait to read the next one edited or not. Because this last one was awsome. Please Post the next chapter soon i an enthraled by this story line.
Much love,
Chaos
Cloey- Tue 17 Jul 2007
I really like this stroy and I'm with you on I think all of your pet peeves lol. I dont like tan people thinking they need a tan either and I'm white lol.
Jestergirl- Tue 17 Jul 2007
Love the pet peeve. thoug I only argree with natural blonds, because when they tan it looks so fake. I am a brunette and I don't like to be pasty white Like I was born. I look better with a tan....some people can pull it off. Others look really fake and need to tone down the spa time.
Violetcarson- Mon 16 Jul 2007
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please send me a notice when you update. I'm completely in love with your story. The sneeking, the whole forbidden thing, it ......I can't explain it just say I can't wait for you to update. If you get a chance check out some of my stories and tell me what you think.
eternityoftears- Mon 16 Jul 2007
yay! greatgreat chapter! ^_^
i loved it!!!
ForgottenBeauty- Mon 16 Jul 2007
well, well, well.... so I guess Naraku is going to be able to sense Sess on Kagome? Dun, Dun, DUUUUUNN! I can't wait for the next chapter. Is that Yura girl going to walk in on them? 'Cause that could be funny. Well, you said it was already written so I hope you put it up soon. Great chapter!!!
Red-Smartiez- Mon 16 Jul 2007
WELL.....awesome love scene!!!! very romantic!! CANT wait for MORE Drama!!!!!! I wonder how Naraku reacted when Sango told him bout Kagome feeling 'ill' and Sesshomaur 'watching' over her? lol
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!! ^_^
P.S. cant wait to read more! =)
Kris- Wed 11 Jul 2007
i LOVE it.
Pam H.- Sat 07 Jul 2007
i love your story and i hope you write more. and please,
can you E-mail me and keep me up-dated because your stories are great, and you're an awsome writer.
Pam H.- Sat 07 Jul 2007
i love your story and i hope you write more. and please,
can you E-mail me and keep me up-dated because your stories are great, and you're an awsome writer.
this story is sooo sweet. ive just finished reading it from beginning to end. ive added it to my faverites list. i was just wondering though...does naraku have hidden cameras set up in the girls locker room?? i am pleases ur keeping sesshomarus x a nice person. kagome doesnt need more people trying to mess things up. and i cant wait to see who sent her the note and rose. kouga, yura or naraku. please update soon. and i hope they dont get caught on this trip......
tilayha
Chaos- Fri 06 Jul 2007
I really love this story i hope that your editing ends soon and thet you post and other chapter soon because i truly can not wait until you do.
Chaos
Lexy22- Fri 06 Jul 2007
UPDATE SOON PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZZZZZZEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Tricia- Thu 05 Jul 2007
just read third to last chap ypu posted....nope all sophmores are like that. That is why they were targeted by the seniors each year for senior prank week. The best was our class because we pulled off something no other class pulled off ...psycological tourture we spread roumors of what we were gonna do, we let them overhear talks of what we were gonna do then ...nothing they were on thier toes in fear all week.
Lady Nya- Thu 05 Jul 2007
Uhm...I'm confused. I was under the impression that you had previously upoaded this chapter. Did you just edit some stuff?
whaa!! You didn't update!!!
Please update!!
Soon!!!
Ja Ne!
Cerulean Lady 24_21- Thu 28 Jun 2007
This story is so sweet and cute!!!!!! No suggestions so far....
Cerulean Lady 24_21- Wed 27 Jun 2007
GREAT STORY! It's so sweet too.
Lexy22- Mon 25 Jun 2007
PLZZZZZZ update soon ^^ can't wait 4 the next chappie, l hope that he apologizez, and she forgives him, PLEASE put me on the update list, my email is b.lowney@cox.net
forgottenbeauty- Mon 25 Jun 2007
silly silly Sesshomaru. I can't believe he'd do that to her. If Hidenori really likes Kagome and wants her happy then why is he making her room with Yura? Is he hoping she'll get in trouble and have to spend more time with him? Anyways, update soon! Love the story!!!
forgottenbeauty- Mon 25 Jun 2007
awwww.... how sweet and romantic. that old man was very nice. too bad most salespeople aren't. that was a cute chapter over all, but then present giving always is a nice thing.
forgottenbeauty- Mon 25 Jun 2007
so... wow. it's always nice to have a little reminder of all the events that have happened. Good thing Sango was so accepting of their relationship and all...
forgottenbeauty- Mon 25 Jun 2007
Hey, so sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. I don't think I even knew you had updated until I got the e-mail yesterday. But, yeah! I guess I'm behind on reviewing. This chapter was kind of funny and I definitely didn't expect the whole Sango thing. Hopefully no one else saw? I guess I'll find out in a few seconds when I read the next chapter?
Woa I LUV Your Story!!!! It's AMAZING!! It's EXACTLY Like High School! And I Know Wut U Mean About Ppl Running Into U. In My School We Have 4 Flights of Stairs and It's Even Worse When Some1 Bumps U On the Stairs and U Fall Then They Look At U Like Your a Loser. Its Like Ok....U R THE 1 THAT PUSHED ME! Grrrr....I Know Your Feelings!!!! lol Well Anyway Please Update Soon!!
Peace, Luv, and Spoons,
Kagome-Chan
Glad to see the updates!!!! Keep up the great work can't wait to see what happens next^_^
Kags21- Wed 20 Jun 2007
I can't believe this story is coming to an end, anyway look forward to the next chapter
Beii16- Tue 19 Jun 2007
YAY!!! updates i was so happy when i saw the new chapters and i can't wait to read the next one i absolutly love this story
nikki- Tue 19 Jun 2007
hey i love your story.. can i be put on the update list.. my email is nikolinavu20@hotmail.com (;p obviously) thanks
I'm already excited for the next chapter!
-River
DreamingPisces- Tue 19 Jun 2007
I love the way you can make a sesshoumaru and kagome fic so sweet as suger and still have problems in between! Keep up the good work , oh! and i do hope that kagome and sesshoumaru get back together cause this would be the perfect time for naraku to make his move! UPDATE SOON! ;)
Vick- Tue 19 Jun 2007
AMAZING!!!
Where do I start? I laughed, cried, shook my feet at some parts (I was laying on my stomach), this was just perfect.
I remember reading the beginnings of this fic a long time ago, and today I noticed an update email so I decided I would re-read. I must say, I'm glad I did. Great cliff-hanger, I'm wanting to read more.
I can't wait for the next update!
Vick
Kara- Mon 18 Jun 2007
I loved it. Oooo. What's going to happen. I hope it has a happy ending. By the way I love Dean Koontz. He's awsome. ^-^
Yeah I get what you mean by when people run into you in the halls. I'm going to be a senior when school starts up again and I have been pushed around since my first day of freshmen year. No one ever apologizes so when I'm pushed from behind I get the evil idea and just stand still and trip the person pushing me.
It sure get's their attention lol. They stop to cuss at you then stalk off mad. It definitely turns whatever bad mood your in into a happier mood, that's for sure. Well I'll let you know now no matter how old a person gets or what grade they are in they will never seem to grow up.
Honest to god I've known so many people who are like that and yet they seem to stay that way forever the mind of a freshmen but the body of a nonfreshmen.
-sighs- Ah well. I hope you update soon because I'm loving your fiction it's grasped my attention!
Ja Ne!
Kami's_Twilight_Angel- Mon 18 Jun 2007
wow...it's been so long since i've read this, i had to go back and read some of the past chapters...when i clicked on the story link i was like, didn't i read this fic b4? lol i'm glad you updated...the chapters were awesome! update when you can! (^^)
katie- Mon 18 Jun 2007
ok first off I LOVE YOUR STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! and second i know you are afraid to write a lemon, listen when you are ready...let me know what you want and i will write it for you. i would be more than happy to. you are a great writer and you need to keep writing and i think you should write a few more fics!! anyways i love you!!! your GREAT!! and please let me know if i can help you with the lemon, i would like to help! GREAT JOB!!!
Can you send me a update when you get a new chapter up. I love the story and would love to read more.
chick_with_innocents- Mon 18 Jun 2007
Hey there, I just started reading your story today and I have to say it's AMAZING!!!!! Seriously, I'm not joking. It's very entertaining. I think it's funny and romantic.
I was curious at first, when I first saw the title, about what kind of story this would be. I have to say it is a whole lot better then I thought it would be.
I love the fact that you didn't just jump right into they're relationship with a bunch of lemons (like some stories). It's so adorable how Kagome and Sesshomaru interact with eachother.
I can't believe your almost done writing this. It's going to be very sad when your finished, but I know you'll put a really good ending to it : )).
Uhhm, would you be able to send me an e-mail when you up date?? I would totally love to know when the next chapter comes up. I hope it's soon.
Lady Nya- Mon 18 Jun 2007
I am SO glad you finally updated! I believe it is safe to say that this story is in my top three list of fics I love.
Eternity of Tears- Mon 18 Jun 2007
Wow...great chapters on both. the christmas gifts were all very cute! ^_^
i'm sorry to hear about your losses.
but great job on the update! ^_^
AnitaThePapermaster- Mon 18 Jun 2007
awesome chapter, please update soon!
katie- Fri 01 Jun 2007
wow i like it please keep going
Lady to the Lord- Sun 27 May 2007
OMG!!! pleez update soon, my friend(mia dragon) hgave me the url 4 this fic, and she siad it was awsome, and it ISSSSSSSS!!!!!! i agree with sango, so better than a soap! lol! well, please, update soon, i really liked it.....
oh my god....don't get me started on that topic. I get the 'look' all the time; so you know what i do? I give them the 'look' back to them times ten. I;m not usually a bitch but when that happens the bitch in me -as well as the black girl in me- comes out to play!!!
Stupid conceited females.....lolz!
Great chapter -and story- and i wannabe special and get added to the mailing list too!!!
PunkrockerX
I love this story!! I wanted to read all the chapters and catch up before I sent out a review. I remember all that in high school. I remember in 9th grade how you were looked at as being lower than the trash cans ha ha. As I went up in the grades I tried to treat the lower classmen as equal as long as they acted their age. Once they stepped out of line you had to put them back in their place. Enough with that back to your wonderful story!! I just love this couple and I love how you have put them together in this story. Can't wait to find out how this story progresses and I wonder who the "Princes" is maybe.....Naraku?!?!? I guess we'll have to wait and find out^_^ Update when you can and please put me on your update list here is my email: millerha1983@embarqmail.com
I am so with you on that pet peeve of yours! and i agree! all upper classman act like they are better than freshman, then when they graduate they think everthing is hunky dory!
Also, it was the 2nd when you last posted, and yet now its the 23th...I a little worried, because you said you'd be updateing soon...
thehotty- Tue 17 Apr 2007
Can I be on the update list? My e-mail's thehotangelannoyed@hotmail.com I really like the story and keep up the good work. Peace out.
~Meg~
inu7kagfanatic3- Sat 14 Apr 2007
hey, could you email me when you update? I really like this story and you at least have good grammar, (most of the time) so, uh, you have my email address. Thank you.
inu7kagfanatic3- Sat 14 Apr 2007
hey, could you email me when you update? I really like this story and you at least have good grammar, (most of the time) so, uh, you have my email address. Thank you.
Lacus Somniorum- Thu 05 Apr 2007
I like your fic a lot! it's not like all the other fics out there, all about sex and sex and only sex. Allow me to add that you've used the NC-17 rating well. it has a substantial plot and is very entertaining. I'm waiting for the next chapter, please inform me of updates!
your #2 fan,
Lacus Somniorum
ceira- Wed 04 Apr 2007
i really like your story. it had me smiling all day. please update soon, i want to find out what happens next. =)
woot woot- Tue 03 Apr 2007
Great Update! Luv the chpaters.
Seniors are Much Better than Juniors and Sophomore and Freshman, Ha Ha! lol
Tana-san- Tue 03 Apr 2007
Hi, I read these last few chapters last night on another site and I'm glad you updated here. I could forsee someone finding out about them. It doesn't take but one person to see and then the gossip begins. Please don't let them get hurt because they care for each other. Sesshoumaru could really be in for a bad time if they're found out. I just hope that they can stay out of everyone's sight until she turns of legal age. I still think she needs to change classes to keep them safe. Good story and I plan to keep reading.
sesshou's gurl- Tue 03 Apr 2007
Update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Gly- Mon 02 Apr 2007
great fanfic update soon
yay! i loved this story so much and checked all the time to see if you'd updated and you finally did!!!!! please update soon i can't wait!
karen- Sun 01 Apr 2007
hey i know this chapter is long past but the sound it makes it beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee my dad died when i was five i remember a lot about him i ask my mom and everyone else about him to remember him more and i was just with my grandpa who almost died
Ametisti- Sat 31 Mar 2007
Great story...misa like alot. And about the pet peeve, I totally understand. Except it's the Freshmen at my school. They just don't seem to understand that us Juniors are way better than them (smarter, older, prettier [^_^]).
Also....you're so evil to us blondes! "cries" It's not like we chose to be blondes, it just happened. And concidering I'm the only blonde in my family....it's kinda weird. Anyhoo, great story and keep it going!
ashley_kun- Sat 31 Mar 2007
i love this storie and i get what you maen by the sophmores because they always think their better AAAAHHH just thinking about it makes me mad *sigh..yell at sis (because she is a sophmore)* okay so just keep writing and hope you dodn't get hand kramps. okay bye ashley_kun ^__^
Reis- Sat 31 Mar 2007
Oh I used to LOVE it when underclassmen mouthed off to me. It made me all warm and malicious inside.
Putting them in their place was the best part of high school.
Megan Consoer- Sat 31 Mar 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Sadiya- Sat 31 Mar 2007
AWESOME STORY!!!!!!! u gotta continue!!!!! i love this story!!!!PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE!!! N THANK U!!!!! =)
IF U STOP NOW, ILL DIE!!!!!!
PWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ CONTINUE N THANK U!!! =)
P.S. lemons pweeeeeeez
P.P.S. e-mail me when u have updated it!! =)
Eternity of tears- Sat 31 Mar 2007
Ahh..this story just gets better and better, thanks for emailing me with the update! ^_^
well, great chapters and i can't wait for the next update!
Birdy Main- Sat 31 Mar 2007
OMG! I love how you did this chapter 7. It's much better then most of the things I read. LOL It mad me blush. I hope all of your chapters are like that. ^^
Tana-san- Fri 30 Mar 2007
You know, I think I read this quite sometime ago, maybe on another site, I not sure. I usually have my reservations about these type of fics but for some reason you made the connection seem innocent and not deliberate and therefore I keep reading. My main concern I think I reviewed on the other site was the fact that Sesshoumaru could get into alot of trouble and have a crime record to contend with should they get caught and as for Kagome she would have to endure the riddicule that people would put her though, so a part of me was against this. I fell in love with a married man whose marriage was literally over for them but they had chilren invovled and I was legal age and he was 12 yrs older than I. None of that mattered though because to me, I didn't want to lose him but in the same respect I didn't want them to lose their father. His wife asked for a divorce and cause her family had money to buy off the judge he lost all visitation rights to his children because she wanted no child support so that gave him no riths to see his kids. He went through hell but I stayed in the background to pick up his chattered heart and gave him a daughter that every parent could only dream of having. He gave me the opportunity to stay home and care for her and become a necessary part of her life and it's 29 yrs later and our little family is still close and strong through love and communication and patience. If Kagome needs tback away alittle to save Sesshoumaru's career as well as his reputation then I think if the love is real they can endure. She doesn't have long until her 18th birthday and he his 21st birthday and then no one can say a word about the relationship they have. Until then she needs to drop his class and transfer to a new History teacher to keep the ridicule down should it happen. I like this fic alot and I'm glad that you didn't abandon it but school, work and the real world are very important things in your life that must be top priority. Just leave us a note that it needs to go on hold and your true admirers will wait. Oh and as for the lemon...don't get embarassed writing it. Once you start it'll be like anything else, as soon as you get your own nitch in how to make good lemonade you'll never want to turn back. I seen so many of you gals fear the unknown of writing it but if you can think it than I feel you can write it. Just go with what your heart tells you and stay true to yourself and your beliefs. Fanfiction is for entertainment for readers but it's a learning experience for you writers. Go for it and Do the best you can. Jen
Crystal Redemption- Fri 30 Mar 2007
sophomores arent all that bad, im a sophomore and i my skool its the freshmen that act all high and mighty...notheless, i guess it all depends on personal maturity-i luv ur story and have been reading a little while but never had the chance tor review, plz update, thank u!
Trice- Fri 30 Mar 2007
I just read all your chapters so far and I find your story very entertaining. I didn't think I would like your story this much and I was kind of sad that I got to your last updated chapter. I wanted to read more but at last I have to wait until your next update. I look forward to reading your next chapter to see how your make are favorite couple lives interesting with their dirtly little secret between the four of them! "P
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