I really love the story. i stay up until i finished reading. there were many parts of the story that i liked and i hope that u keep up the good work with ur stories and i alsp hope that i could read other stories that r long lik urs. ppl 2 day get alittle lazy and dont lik writing long stories. in a way longs stories keeps the person in mystery.lol

I really love the story. i stay up until i finished reading. there were many parts of the story that i liked and i hope that u keep up the good work with ur stories and i alsp hope that i could read other stories that r long lik urs. ppl 2 day get alittle lazy and dont lik writing long stories. in a way longs stories keeps the person in mystery.lol

It's awesome. Not much really to be said about it. You've written it excellently, it's a wonderful story. I hope that you never seice writing. ^_^ Great work darlin'! Blessed Be in all you do. JA!

Whee! I loved this fic.

I'll agree that the ending was more of a general summary, but it did tie everything up without seeming hasty! It worked, and that's all that matters.

I have to say, I'm going to miss this fic... it was the perfect mixture of everything, and I was never un-satisfied with anything. You are a wonderful writer!

Wow...That was quite a breath of fresh air. Most commonly among stories that are 50+ chapters they have horribly short chapters that all seem like blank filler...But this one was actually good. You dragged it out enough so it didn't seem rushed as most stories do. Your chapters were of nice size not the irratably long for those attempting to impress, nor the short of an amateur. Your updates seemed timely, even though I didn't read this fiction untill it was complete, your author comments seemed to imply timeliness.
Your vocabulary of both literacy and biology was impressive. Your disease seems plausable, albiet it had a non-professional name. Just for reference, a disease title is either the last name of the discoverer, the first victim, or it's place of effect. Like cerebral palsy, cerebral meaning brain and palsy meaning innability to function or control functions, it makes obvious that it is a disease that is the cause of mentaly and commonly physicaly challenged peoples.

But enough of that, your work was impressive though you missed a few errors that are easily understood and don't cause a problem even for our less intelligent readers. I'd give your peice here and 'A' a bitch would give it at lowest an 'A-' Congrats at your skill, may you continue to gift this site with your skill in all area's including the rare skill of keeping the characters in character.

wow ..... although i dont usually read extreamly long fic's ... this one turned out amazing and i also congratulate you on finishing the story , i noe how hard it can be trying to finish of a story without dragging i on to much, good job ^__^

This was a HUGE effort on your part, and a HUGE success as well, from my point of view! I think you did an admirable job of trying to tie up the loose ends in the last chapter - after such an involved fic, it would have been almost twice it's length if you had gone into ALL the details. I thoroughly enjoyed this story, your writing is superb, detailed, and engaging. The twists and turns in your plot were extremely intriguing and I commend you on keeping the continuity going so well (some writers seem to find it hard to remember what they had a character doing several chapters prior, you know?). I sincerely hope you consider writing more once you have rested up from producing this opus!! I will keep looking for you when I do searches here, that's for sure! :) ~~Wiccan~~

Your story was amazing.. i kinda got tired eyes near the end so i have a question for you. did Sessh and Kag get married? But it was amazing congrats...

Sarah

This is absolutely wonderful! I love your story! well ja ne for now!

Wow, Wow, Wow! I love how this just sucked me in! You Go! Hoover nor Eureka vaccums has nothing on you!. I'm enjoying this! Yes! Yes! Yes!. This narration from Sesshomaru P.O.V. is remarkable! Yep, this chapter sucked me in! Deeper I shall go! Peace!

Awwww. This is a beautiful story, completely. POWER 2 DA AUTHOR!

This story is wonderfully written. I especially like the way everything is so detailed. Not many people describe everyday events with such detail. I look forward to your next installment.