You spelled Sesshoumaru* wrong. There is no O at the end. If there was his name would be pronounced "Ses-sho-mah-ROH" instead of how its supposed to be pronounced: "Ses-sho-mah-RUU" you should change it it is kinda distracting. Other than that, Good fanfic!

I really love your story and hope you write more really soon so I know what happends next