awsome story. love to read more.

hmm i really like this story though i know it was meant as a sess/kag but i kinda like the Nar/kag, and i hope that one day you will continue this fic it really is good

~Dark

I love it and it's also kind of funny!

i am already totally in love with your fic. Yeah, naraku is OOC, but a GOOD OOC. I've read a couple of fics now, not on this site though, where naraku is as a person actually quite human and almost kind, and it's only the demons inside of him making him act the way that he does. i've always held a fondness for these portrayals, i think that they're more realistic as his character than the 'kill you because killing is fun' portrayal. i think that you've done a wonderful jjob with his character, and while this is a kag/sess site, so i can't really suggest the nar/kag pairing, it would be really sweet to have them become good friends or one time lovers before he dies, or something. naturally, kagome will end up in sesshoumarus arms, and i do look forward to this, i'm a huge fan of the pairing. anywho, i look forward to your next update, and will be sure to keep an eye out for any more of your work.