Oh THANK YOU. I spent a whole 30 minutes in total bliss, forgetting all the woes of the world. It might have been a bugger of a chapter to write, but it sure READ beautifully... and poignantly... and... perfectly. As I am all-too-fond of saying lately, YOU ROCK!! :-) ~~me~~
Wow, u can really feel the atraction between them. They're slowly coming together and I'm pretty sure that everyone is looking forward to that. Poor Kagome got strep throat from Rin huh? It sucks to have it. Its a good thing that she got Rin and Sesshoumaru. Its just so heart warming. I look forward to your next chapter.
Aww, your story makes me so happy. I'm so happy you updated, it's a great energizer to keepme going through my busy week.
Yay!!! Yay for Kags and Sesshou building a relationship! This is really a touching chapter. ^_^ I enjoyed it very much. Made all of the waiting worth it.
Now that was just too damn cute. ^-^
This is getting fluffier by the minute.
I love it -squeeeeee-
Ahem... they are sooo cute like this. But why is Rin the only one realising what's going on here? Ah, yeah, I nearly forgot... she's a kid. lol.
Good job hon.
Dewa mata
So sweet, and such a welcome read before work! One great thing about working from home is a quick morning jaunt for updates. It's my morning paper, if you will, right beside that vital mug of coffee. *still becoming more coherent with each sip* Again with this chapter, nary a flaw: perfect prose and realistic, empathetic emotion. I love each meticulous word.
And I tell you want, if a man takes care of you when you're sick and disgusting, it's love. I know we already know they love each other, but damn, Kagome, you can't escape that kind of care. I can't wait for the moment they both realize what everyone else already knows. :)
BTW, I still haven't had the time to dive into the links you sent me. I know, I know! I have the time to read but not to write? Ah well! Your stuff is my percocet, what can I say?
Loved it, as always!
This chapter was perfect! You had me in a fit of laughter at the whole doctor scene, I couldn't stop laughing to save my life. Wonderful story and especially love where you are taking it. Keep up the fantastic work and hope to see an update soon!
Beautiful... absolutely beautiful. Wonderful interaction with the characters... as much as I wish you would update more often, the chapters are definitely worth the wait.
Oh - I just adore this story.
So damn cute - RinRin, and the poor smelly dog, and Sess' interaction with his doctor friend.
So freaking fun!!
Can't wait for more.
This chapter was absolutely delightful! I liked the imagery of a worried Rin curled up on Sess, and him reassuring her. A small cookie bribe seals the deal!
I love Kagome's Percocet/vodka induced behavior! You can feel his burn at her pushing all the buttons on the elevator.
(The description of her looking like an escaped mental patient had me rolling, btw!)
She just cracked me up as she discusses with the doctor her physical ailments and self-medication practices... LMAO!!! I like that he just takes it all in stride, and sees the interesting person beneath the illness... he wants to ask her out!
"Snorlaxagome..." very nice, and soooo attractive! This part was particularly sweet. I can see him sitting there, entertaining Rin with books, while they both keep an eye on Kagome.
At the end, it is so poignant they both know Rin is desperately is trying to pull the threads they are weaving into each other's lives into a family she can wrap herself up in. This is so very much something a child would try to will into being. You portrayed it very, very well... I can't wait to see what comes next.
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