Reviews for Intertwined by Alon

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LadyFugue (Chapter 34) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

Aaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!! Stupid Sesshoumaru! Poor Kagome.


ILoveOscar (Chapter 34) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

How sad ;_;. This part felt like 'The Little Mermaid' I saw before Disney's version came out. The little mermaid saved her prince from drowning, unfortunately some other woman came by at the moment he regained consciensness. The little mermaid had to flee before she could be spotted by this other female so the prince never knew who really saved him. He married this unknown woman and the little mermaid turned to foam -she'd traded her life for the chance at getting her prince. She never regretted saving him and held no grudge against the imposter. In the afterlife she became a guardian angel looking after children. I was only a child when I saw this and it broke my heart ;_;. Oh but how hated that other woman who without shame took the credit that wasn't hers.


Mona (Chapter 34) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

Great update, looking forward to the next chapters.


Susy V (Chapter 34) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

Aw. Poor Kagome. I wish Sesshomaru could notice something. Maybe something will happen and Kikyo will tell him she didn't do anything?


kagomesirene (Chapter 34) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

T_T


roberta. (Chapter 34) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

Thanks for the update


roberta. (Chapter 33) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

Am glad someone knows the truth.


RedDestiny92 (Chapter 33) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

Oh that's sad, I feel bad for Kagome obviously it bothers her but she seems to want him happy, take your man girl Kikyo can just go jump in a lake or something.


Nicka (Chapter 33) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

I keep hitting refresh looking for the next update...... I hope that when he gets all of his faculties functioning he scents the area and himself and see that it was Kagome and not Kikyo that did the work. I feel bad for Kagome b/c she is just now coming into her feelings and I hope Hiro tell anyway. 


Mona (Chapter 33) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

Another great one, but I wonder how Kagome plans on hiding this from Sesshoumaru and everyone else.  She clearly has the wounds, bruises and dirt to prove she was there to help him.  How is she going to explain those visible facts?  I guess I'm going to have wait to read more chapters to find out, looking forward to it.


Saiya (Chapter 33) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

Amazing


Susy V (Chapter 33) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

You're ripping me apart with all of this angst! >.<  but it's sooo good!


FizzyWig (Chapter 32) - Fri 13 Nov 2015

I hate kikyo no matter what story shes in Ugh!!! Great story BTW :)


Fyrelilly (Chapter 32) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Ugh that's so heartbreaking.  The scene reminds me of the little Mermaid,  not the Disney version,  but the one made in the 70's that follows Hans Christian Andersons tale. 

 

Thank you for the quick updates, the drama is certainly getting exciting! 


LadyFugue (Chapter 32) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Awwwww! Poor Kagome 


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 32) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Poor Kagome, keep it coming.


Marie (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

I knew it I knew I knew it. I can decide wether  or not like kikiyo. Or not yet but she's getting there. 


xDori (Chapter 32) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Awww poor Kagome. Let the drama begin lol


Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Hmm.... The first thought that came to Sesshoumaru's mind is "it's Kikyo who is saving him"... Meaning he thinks more of Kikyo than Kagome. It makes sense since he is pursuing Kikyo. Though I feel bad for Kagome that another person is taking the credit. Did not expect the "little mermaid" twist haha


Didie (Chapter 32) - Thu 12 Nov 2015

Ooooh.... 'Little Mermaid'-like situation! How sad....


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