Your have a poetic way with words. I'm used to speed reading since I rarely have time to enjoy reading but I take my time with your works. The way you write is so beautifully descriptive and somewhat haunting in its rawness that it always manages to captivate my imagination. Please keep going!
Truly a great story. One of the best I've read. Very engaging from start to end. You have a magical way with words. I'm in love with your characters. I hope you plan to update this further? I really really love it! Looking forward to your next update! :)
Aww :( poor Sessh
Love that Kagome is gutsy and very no nonsense, as well as a realist. Love how she interacts with InuYasha and finally is able to show love again. Really live this story which shows so much real life situations in it. Not all fluff and fancy.....
Also love the growing interactions with Sesshoumaru. Really looking forward to reading more!
Really loveeed loveddd this chapter morr than any other i m gladdd sessho's mother approves of kagome.... Phewww sessho thought of Rin as a daughter boy am i so glad felt like a burden lifted off of my shoulders... plz be well Happy new yearrr may this year be awesome to you :) heheh i can't end a review without saying this please please please update chapter soooonnnnnn :)
Lovely as always, Stella darling!
Omg i was just thinking about this fic yesterday bein new year and alll will have to contact every one and wish which i m not really intooo then recalled kagome's line ppl need the confirmation through constant and meaningless contact and i have to do it otherwise they will think I don't care about themmmm ...... your stories are amazing but this one is much more precious to me every chapters hits home the starting kkkagomes monologue gives so much insight into life you are great allll authors are great ^_^ i m so glad you alll are so creative and are here inn dokuga writing :) and i m able to read them ... enough rambling now i have to go and read the chapter hehehhehe i was just so excited when i saw the update i had to tell yoou this i thot it was sort of telepathy i 'm thinking about it n d next day its here ... New year is llllooking good now since i get my favourites authors upppdatinggg
I've noticed that she's doing the things she criticizes other humans for more and more now...
I can't decide if I like her or not. It all seems hopeless and depressing anyway. I'm glad you updated though.
I'm eager to know how this will end.
Great story happy new years
Oh my...I have missed you so much Dear Stella. It was wonderful to pick up this story again. This chapter was just delicious and I savored every word. Thank you so much for this lovely gift on the start of this new year. Hugs!
It has been quite a long time but I enjoyed the update. Hopefully a new chapter will come soon.
Kindness my ass when there is a stipulation to assisting a person. More like a loan. I’ll do this for you if you do this for me, type loan. People are such conniving douche bags… I could go on a complete tirade on the subject! But I regress. The intro to the chapter, as always, guts the reader with such insight into Kagome’s past, memories that are filled with bitterness.
I must first say I loved Totosai. The old coot is such a riot! Much laughter is to be had with this old codger around.
But what I find most beautiful about this chapter is how you described pain when Kagome was questioned Sesshomaru about his father’s affair. So eloquently scripted, yet brutally forthright about the damage emotional pain can cause a person. And yet somehow… it ends in a sexual innuendo of Sesshomaru being ‘trapped inside her’. Naughty, naughty, aren’t you, my devious author friend? Hoe deliciously done! I don’t know how you did it honestly… I envy this ability of yours so much!!
Sesshomaru’s mama is one piece of work… so contradictory, which makes her character fascinating. And an unknown, as one will never really know what she is capable of or what she may do. Unpredictable. Lethal female. Kagome should tread cautiously around this woman/demon.
…And that last part, especially that last line. You want my heart, don’t you? Ripped it right out of my chest, you did. Poor little Rin. Poor Sesshomaru.
Lovely chapter! So glad to see you back in action, and more to come in the near (very near) future! <3
T_T I MISS THIS FIC SO BADLY PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATEEEE NEWW CHAPPIEEE XD NO MANNNYYY MANNNYYY CHAHPPIE
Hey, great story! I know it's the first time I'm reviewing it but I am just a terrible reader, I read and read and forget to leave the proper reviews, sorry :P This story is great! Really! I have been keeping track of it and I got really anxious for the next chapter everytime. Great writing style you have and I really like the different "theme" of this story, full of antiheros (I don't really know if this is the right word for it in english), your characters seem amanzingly humans. Congrats!I sincerely hope you continue with it :)
Nice! keep up the good work.
Love love <3
I love/hate your story. Love because this is the first time I've read a story where Inu is taken in by Kagome that is well written. Hate because you have left me hanging and I want more. Thank you for writing a well written story. Its been a while since I've read one (that I'm not currently reading.) Please update ASAP!!!!!
Just a really nice chapter. The way it flowed was very satisfying and the beautiful words you used, who can resist the charm of phantasmagoria when used in such a way. You always put such depth and feing into your stories. She practically has to drag it off of his lips but he finally answers her questions. Maybe not to her entire sstisfaction but he does reply. And yet, there are still so many unanswered questions. It's like watching a rose unfold in time lapse. Oh and more joy, a visit from mother. Love that cherry on the top. Cheers. Thanks for making my day. Hugs!
Loving this fanfiction as always. I really can't wait to see shippo! Him and yasha would be cute playmates...squee
Aww. SHIPPO YAHOOOO
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