Such a beautiful chapter!!! I can't wait to read more! Do I sense smut?!?!?!
I love this story!!! Please update soon!
Loved it. I hope the next chapter comes quickly cause I can't wait to see what happens next.
Yuuuup c; Definetly My Fav Chap , Amazing Chemistry Between Them
Omg I want you to update so bad!!!! This has been one of My favorites, and I look almost every day to see if it's updated your writing style is really good and you know what you're writing about which makes it even better. I am really looking forward to your next chapter!!!!!
Also, just cause I saw some of the other reviews, I'm really glad they didn't have sex this chapter. Technically since he is not in the position to consent because he's a slave, every time he's been paid to have sex it's rape. So, I'm glad Kagome insisted they didn't. I was starting to feel a bit uncomfortable, so kudos to her!
I like the flow of the story so far. I like the characterizations you've developed. I rarely enjoy AUs this much.
One thing I'd like to suggest, though, is not having such obvious situations be so hard for the main characters to decifer. I understand Sesshomaru is bound to have rather serious trust issues because of how he's been used in the past, but he still seems to be as intelligent as he is in canon. I had a hard time believing that he wouldn't understand Kagome wanting to be let out as a that she didn't buy him.
But, then again with trust issues that large, it's underdstandable. I just felt it took him a bit long to realize, especially since he can smell fear.
Otherwise, your writing is impeccable. I'm waiting anxiously for the next chapter!
hai...finally i got the dokuga member! and the first story i want to review so bad for so long is yours!!!
usually when i want review your story i go to fanfiction.net. but now, i just want to review your story here. for the first time i saw your story, i know i will like it. and i really like it alot. hope you can update faster when you have spare time ofcourse. just fighting till the end please. don't give up in the midle of story. i really can't wait what happen next. ganbatte!!
Ough not a lemon...(pout...!) but thanks for your up date... it's oke to slow down the relationship...it's more romantic...
I LOVE this story! Can't wait until you update!
Oh my gosh, to be with sesshy XD, i feel like i'm dying lol
Ask and you shall receive. I love the latest chapter and can't wait to read more. I am eager to know what they will discuss and the outcome of said conversation.
Loving this fanfic and can't wait to read more. Please update soon :)
Cool, keep it coming.
*le gasp* (faints) such a end to a chapter, this story totally captivates me so please continue writing this fanfic cause i cant get enough of it so update when you can ! >.< ^.^
+_+ more.. It Iz an magnificant story >.> <3
:o OMG Such A Hanger ! Amazing Chap I Want To Say This Is My Fav But I Can Tell The Next Will Be :)
Noooooo It was too short!!!!
I did enjoy the chapter though... poor Kagome whatever is she to do all alone in a dark room with Sess *snickers*
Update soon =D
Not Fair!!! You can't leave me hanging!!!
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