great chapter!
Nice chapter, keep it coming
next chapter please
Both chapters are great, keep it coming
Holy balls.
This is AMAZING!
I love how you display Kagome different.
I love the culture factors you added.
I love the story line.
I love this. It's great. Don't stop.
great chapter! i am loving this story!
really good and princes of demon ahh cool keep them coming.
you rock!
words can't describe how cool this story is! i am looking forward to your next update
Loving this!! Update again soon! XD
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired four episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
Your story is progressing nicely, and I can't wait to see how all of it unfolds.
wow! your amaze-balls! i cant wait how you are going to incorporate sesh into this story. iLoveit and the little hawaiin words you put into it is prerry cool too.. mahalo
That was ... words can not describe how great that was. If not for it being based off Inuyasha I would say make this into a book. I would buy two copies. Update soon.
I started to read your story and found it has a very intersting concept, however, it needs to be seperated into smaller paragraphs so that it is easier to read. You should also break up the dialogue from the main text, that will cause less confusion. And also instead of writing numbers spell them out. I wish you all the best with your first fan-fiction!
Like the story please update soon
i found very interesting the story
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