love it...can't wit to see what she picks and to see how Sam will take to her being part of the other pack :)

Red hum? >.< what could it be? 

Thanks for the update! <3

Really, really good!  Please update soon...

I demand more and as soon as possible.  Leaving it on that note was cruel.  

Love your take on this new world but seriously that cliff hanger is painful.

Good story so far, can't wait for more.

Please continue I would leave to read more!

Aaahh! Cliffhanger! I'm hooked.  I really like your writing style it's easy to follow and everly discriptive.  This is a really good start and I can't wait to read more!

Nuuu! Keep going!  Such a cliffhanger!  I look forward to the next chapter.  Thank you!

I love this so far!! Please continue it. I usually don't like "Kagome goes to America" stories but this one is great. Can't wait to see updates!!

So Shippo's alive??? >.< Great news :D 

Thanks for the update! <3 

This story seems like it's gonna be a good one. I'm excited to see what you plan to do with it...please update soon! :-)

- MC

Love the flow of this story, it is fresh and exciting!  I am glad that Shippo is first, I always liked the dynamics of their relationship!  Good Job!

Intriguing story idea.  I hope you can follow up with chapters quickly!

The idea for this story is really good and I'm cutious where you will go with it. This chapter was pretty good. Nothing really stood out to me. if I notice something later I will mention it.

I must confess. I read your other two chapters last week and didn't leave a review, but there's tons of potential with this story so I can just stay silent. I'm enjoying it immensely. Thank you for updating so quickly. Until the next chapter.

Nice, keep it coming.

 

 This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.

How God Created Mother

Good took the fragrance of a flower,
The majesty of a tree,
The gentleness of a morning a dew
The calm of a quiet sea,
The beauty of a twilight hour
The soul of a starry night
The laughter of the rippling brook,
The grace of a bird in flight,
Then God fashioned from these things
A creation like no other,
And when His masterpiece was through,
He called it simply...MOTHER.

Happy Mother's Day!

soooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

Very interesting with the councils for all the different parts of the US and world. Though I'm from Cali and we arent all Hippies who live at the beach lol

-MissKatt

Ok, Kagome couldn’t be a bit more mysterious xD

Thanks for the update! <3 

Very nice introduction so far. As for your first story, it is pretty sound. Grammar and punctuation are superb. I look forward to the updates for this story (:

-MIssKatt