Gaaaawd, your limes are so eloquently written!! I love this story so much!
-MissKatt
I didn't even finish the chapter before I had to type my impression of the exchange between Kagome and the Southern Lord. I love the wit, the subtlety and the meanings that were conveyed! Extremely well done!
ER mer gerd! I looooove this story. Your flow of words is so beautiful, I could cry! Seriously well done, my dear!! (:
Wow! This is an amazing story! Can't wait for more!
Ooooo This Was A Very Passionate Chap c;
Good, keep it coming.
My Lord, Oh God! This has to be one of the best stories ever!! I love how well you are keeping everyone in character and how wonderfully delicious their interactions are! I am speechless to describe how much I am enjoying this amazing story!! I am loving every letter, every word, every parragraph that you have written!
The way you describe every setting and every moment, transports me to the middle of the story and makes it even more alive for me. The intensity, the heat, the anticipation, is a sweet torture that I would happily suffer for the rest of my life! I can't believe how strategically you have build an all consuming fire without even having them together for the first time! It's an ache that burns brightly and if so far it has been this amazing, I can't even imagine how intense it will be for them when they finally join for the first time!
Their Erotic encounters are like poetry in motion! They are nothing short of a beautiful choreographed dance that always culminates with the reader wishing to be a part of this! It takes your breath away and makes you feel as if this is the fairytale that you want to be part of, want to become relaity!
I will forever be grateful for you having written this amazing story, and sharing it with us! I will cherish every chapter and will faithfully follow and read anything you write from here on!
My gratitude and admiration, wishing you the same joy we experience while reading your stories!
MC
WOW!! Loved it from the start and even more at the end!!
WoW!!! This was HAWT!!!!! Great vivid imagery.
wow, i love the way you express their feelings and actions. it is a wow story. hope for you not to take long to update.
It's a good thing this Kagome is AU and powerful in her own right. She seems to have more than one enemy ready to take her out.
that was great! Thanks for posting
ooh. . The plot thickens :p Thanks a lot for writing the chapter
He acquiesced rather easily regarding the torture.
History repeating...
This seems like really bad timing on his part.
Good thing he stuck around.
Awwwww :)
I love this story SO much!
Wow, this is so different but SUCH a breath of fresh air! I LOVE it!
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