i can tell its going to be awesome already. dont worry you're doing great. i couldnt even tell that this is your first time writing a sess/kag story. the flow seems to be really natural. its really easy to tell whose a novice and who isnt. great job i love it. please continue! please please please please!
Please don't take offense: I swear I have read a story similiar to this. It started like the same way your story did. I think I have read it on fanfiction.net but I do not remember the name of the story. Maybe you're on fanfiction.net too and you're the author of said story. Please nlighten me. Thanks.^^
Privet!
It's been an age since I've had a chance to read anything on Dokuga. It was quite interesting that one of the first stories I glanced at, I found Russian. That took me back several years, lol. My Russian is pretty rusty but I got the gist of what you were saying, though I think the grammar was off some. :) But please don't take offense... I could be wrong. Like I said, its been a long time since I had to read Russian, let alone phonetic. I'll be interested to see how you tie in how someone with Russian connections ended up in Japan in 1502.
Udachi vam v vashey istorii!
