| No, you're not mean at all. That was perfect. PERFECT. If this were a play, you'd so get a standing ovation. Great job!
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Sep 2008
| The smut is unnecessary. This is beautifully written as is. Nice job, and love the title, by the way...
UtterChaos247 (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Sep 2008
| hmm, smut makes things more realistic/in-perspective for me... but the way u wrote it was poetic and beautiful, *^_^* i don't blame u for ending it there
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