It's been a while since I've left you a review, and I felt that one was due. ^^

I'm impressed with your character development. Especially, in our dear Kagome's case. I love how you made her this insecure girl, still wet behind the ears, with normal fears and self-doubt. It's thrilling to see how she adapts to the situations forced upon her, how she grows mentally, and learns that not all things are black or white, that there is no reason why she must be one thing and cannot be another at the same time, that purity doesn't mean chastity.

Sesshomaru is as deliciously evil as he has alays been. His transformation is more subtle, but undeniable, nonetheless. The more he entagles himself with this woman, the more he starts to understand that humans are not labels, but actual people with feeling, and unpredictable in their reactions. He expects to see darkness in everything, but 'tis not how the real world works, and much like Kagome he must now accept this.

Your writing is as beautiful as ever, it flows, and I never say that easily. Wonderfully descriptive, and expressive. You make me empathize with all characters, make them real, full fledged people I can relate with, even the villains. Amazing! Well done!

Congrats on your nomination, too! It was well desrved, and I wish you the best on the awards!

Looking forward to more soon, yes?

Sesshomaru is just so evil!!! It fits him so well and this story is amazing!

please update soon...can't wait to see what happens

woa...a jealousy sessy? thanks for update

This is soooo good. I can't wait until the next update. I wonder how sesshy will handle his new found feelings for kag?? 

Ahhh what a great chapter!! Am I the only one hoping Onigumo returns as Naraku wanting to take Kagome away from

 Seashomaru? >.>

sesshy ALWAYS get what he wants. naraku

Really Sesshomaru....hasn't he figured out that Kagome would be appalled to learn that he incited the villagers to kill Onigumo and he allowed her harm before "saving" her?

Poor Kagome, right now, even though Sesshomaru has admitted he has feelings for her, he believes he can "teach" her his lessons and change her. It seems as if he still thinks of her as a pawn still.

I do enjoy your story line though and cannot wait for the next chapter.
Maybe we can see Kikyo and Inuyasha in the next few chapters!!!!

I second satuross review! :p

but where has Sesshoumaru gone??

great story!

Lemons next chapter hehehe

poor Kagome.

Being 15, at an age of that time to usually already (or about to) be married but knowing she would never be....seeing all the horrors she has so far.

But I am worried, how will KAgome sugdue Onigumo once he is well? He is a man and much stronger than Kagome. He could overpower her and harm her. I wonder if she's thought of that...

Nice, keep it coming. 

It's official, I'm hooked!!

I have to say I was reserved when I first came into this story. But now I am completely in love with it. FAVE!. BOOKMARKED! I love Sesshomeru's character. He is truely a 'demon' in this story rather than a dog spirit that a lot of stories make him out to be. Kagome's character I have a love hate relationship with. I was a bit put off that she is only 15 in this story and Sesshomeru is like centuries and im sure over 18 in human years (pedo alert? lol) Anyways what I am trying to see is that I love this story. Please update soon. I will be looking out for them. :)

Such a good chapter! Penis analysis made me laugh

I really like this chapter. It's cool that you delved more into the "bad" guy's character and history. It's hard to hate someone that you truly know...which is the dilemma miss Kagome is finding herself in! Great job! I look forward to the next chapter from you :)

First off you're doing a great job bc I'm all riled up.  Ugh, Kagome.  I'm all for a compassionate heroine but not at the cost of being an idiot - girl ain't got no sense. As soon as the mofo started joking about his damn hard on, she should have kicked him in the balls.  This may sound harsh but it's bc this Kagome is so polarizing, which is a compliment to your writing but at the same time I may have to not read this anymore, I almost can't handle it.  I keep smacking my forehead and it hurts.  If I was in a theater, I'd be throwing popcorn at the screen and yelling nooooooooooooooooo, girl, don't do it!

I'm wondering if Sesshomaru really left Kagome or if he is watching her believing she will kill Onigumo while he is weak

YAAAAAY! An update I'm so happy~

Goodness though....I want to ship Naraku and Kagome together. Bad me xP NarakuxKagome is my other guilty pleasure. Great work, I really am getting more excited as this goes along!