whoa character development! thanks for an update! it has been awhileT_T
keep on seeing new chapter of switch in ff.net but its just re-runs T_T
I am in love with your story! I was having doubts and second guessing about a body change of sesshoumaru and inuyasha but I'm glad I sticked it thru. It is so amazing having one brother understand the life and essence of the other, and how sess speaks with the others and relates. I just love this enigma of a story. Can't wait for you to finish the next chapter and the story, and what would happen when they turn back to normal. Aaaaaaaaah~! XD keep writting!!
haha awesome update!!
seshomaru always makes the better alpha :P
but i wonder whats gonna happen to rin-jaken-inu. thats gonna go insane too!
Big fan! Please keep updating; I'm a writer too and I know it can be frustrating but keep up the good work! I've seen your story and editing improve as you write so keep getting better! We're all here to support you because we love being creative and using these beautiful characters to inspire us to be better in ourselves and our writing. Feel free to reach out if you need a thought, an edit, or just to bounce ideas, we're all here for you!
Again, I must say that this story is just so beautifully written. I know there are grammatical errors and typos, but I have no problem understanding or enjoying what is written. If you butchered the English language and made absoluely no sense, I'd understand someone making this comment I read, but really, I have been reading fanfiction for quite some time and this is really good work.
I love the emotions that Sessshoumaru has to deal with that he normally has no real interaction with let alone how to use them, and what they mean. This particular night has got to have some real influence on him as a living being. Seeing and feeling Kagome's reactions because she loves him(InuYasha) despite his love for Kikyou. That she is willing to stand by him in any way he'll allow her too, just so she can be with him. Love is a very fickle emotion and with someone like Kagome, it's unconditional and everlasting. Surely he'll have to see this, being as intelligent as he is, even though he may think her foolish for doing so. He also has to understand that she is still young for a human and still has alot of growing, learning and experiencing to do. This changes things most times. She'll eventually see, as well as feel, that the love InuYasha and she share is deeper than being in love and on a totally different level. But she has to learn this just as Sesshoumaru has to learn of, or shall I say, let go of his emotions and allowed himself to feel something other than contempt and hate for a weaker species. It isn't feeling love or kindness that makes you weak, it really makes you stronger. Like InuPapa said, "Do you have something to protect?" If you do, you'll fight all of hell off for it.
Keep doing what you're doing. This is a very good story and this is becoming so touching. Kagome is finally being allowed to speak from her heart without worrying what InuYasha is thinking because right now, to her, he's not "her" InuYasha. Ooohhh, I love it!!!! JEN
