You are quite adept at writing Sesshomaru (and Touga/Mattaki in other stories) as quite the devious bastard that we still cheer for anyway. That is the mark of a good author; keeping the less than favorable qualities of a character intact while infusing them with reasons to still love them. The same can be said for Kagome. You always make her a real character with all the flaws intact instead of setting her up as some "perfect" woman that does not exist. Thank you as always.
I am so, so sorry that I have missed this amazing story! I barely stumbled upon it today and by the time I reached the last chapter I could tell I was already hooked!!
Sesshomaru striked me first as interested in Kagome mainly because of her power. Then I figured that it was both, her power, and the desire to cause pain to Inuyasha, but by the time I finish reading this last chapter, I realized that he trully has feelings for Kagome, and the fact that he came across as such a tender being, actually stole the breath away from me!
At moments it has been almost painful to see Kagome's reactions to Sesshomaru's advances, and the way she keeps denying him seems to deeply hurt him, but I am hoping she will eventually come to realize her own emotions and make up for all this to Sesshomaru!
I am really looking forward to your next update and will be waiting for it with great anticipation!
Thank you for writing such a great story, and Thank you for sharing with us!!
Hugs and best wishes:
MidCat
I actually love this story! I wanted to write something like this myself! It's great love it love love it!!! I you portray Sesshoumaru so well! As well as Kagome! I wonder how she's going to feel when she goes back to the past, will seeing the photo make her realise she can't fight it? Why is she fighting it so hard?? Will future sesshoumaru turn up again? Future Kagome? Please update soon!! Xx
Phyllis (Chapter 2) - Fri 13 Sep 2013
Your writing style is superb, my dear! I love your word usage, the LACK of typo's and grammatical mistakes (which can be very distracting sometimes), and the whole flavor of this story. I am reading each chapter one by one, getting lost in each. Very nice!! :)
Phyllis (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Sep 2013
Oh, I really like this! The sexual tension is already there, palpable, and building. I can't wait to keep reading! Very well done!
I can't even tell you the feels in experiencing right now. This story is to Damn good!!!
Update!!
OMG THIS STORY ONLY GETS BETTER!!!!! I wonder how you will do episode 99 in your story how Sesshomaru and Kouga meet face to face :) Please continue! :D
REDWOLF (Chapter 7) - Thu 12 Sep 2013
Haha! That should give Kagome a kick in the right direction......oh, imagine if a whole role of pictures of their children and grandchildren came out! The girl would have stroked out on him...the poor girl...mwahahahaha!
Eve (Chapter 7) - Thu 12 Sep 2013
It is so hard to wait to see what happens next, but you are doing a great job with this story!
Keep up the good work!
omfg. he is so creepy hahahahahahahahahahah
TKE (Chapter 7) - Wed 11 Sep 2013
poor kagome, shes caught from both sides.....
Woot chapter 7 was awesome!!!!
Please let me know about your original fiction story, I'd love to read it!
I really like this story (honestly thought I wouldn't in the beginning). Since the futuer Sesshomaru showed a picture of Kagome's future self with him, there had to be a reason. Poor Kagome seems to be near a mental breakdown. Maybe Sesshomaru (past one) should "kidnap" her and allow her some time to recouperate and get away from the stress of being claimed and Inuyasha's drama and the Naraku hunt. Poor thing seems to need a little relaxation.
Although, if Inu's do not force the female to their side, then why is Sesshomaru entertaining the idea of forcing her to stay by his side and in the past (see chapter 6)???? Also, if Sesshomaru was so intent on seducing her heart, would he continually badger her into such an emotional mess? Granted, she is getting hysterical at times but he should understand (by now) that she's fighting herself and him so hard she's exhausting herself and might be unable to fight when it really counts. It seems that as much trouble with sleeping, resting, and actually relaxing and getting downtime is non-existent and that would mean she'd be too tired to fight off one of Naraku's schemes.
Please update so we can find out!!!!!!!!!!
P.S. love your stories.....been going back and rereading Illumination and The Longest Journey....awesome stories.
Come it, keep it coming.
mari (Chapter 7) - Wed 11 Sep 2013
i loved the update as always perfect.
Alii (Chapter 7) - Wed 11 Sep 2013
Lmaooo hahahaha she can't run from the future! Please updae soon! I love it!(:
So freaking awesome. ANd I know all about the whole writing your own story. DOing that right now actually. Even have a tam of prereaders to go through it to tell me what they think. So yep, I understand that. Good luck and you know I will hit that read button no matter what!
rose (Chapter 7) - Wed 11 Sep 2013
next chapter please
Kat (Chapter 6) - Fri 06 Sep 2013
okay things are about to become epic! Love this story update soon.
Keep it coming.
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