This chapter was sweet, keep it coming.
The ring is beautiful, really quite perfect, and I love this chapter. The description around the outfit, ring and jewelry fall out of the style of the language. Just a suggestion, but it could be looked over and revised a bit. I do love the antics of Sesshomaru, and the description of them. :)
Something's going to happen...and it's not going to be good when it does. I await more! >.<
--Silver
loved it.
Confessions!!! Oh, the intensity of this chapter was brilliant! Though I wanted to strike Sesshomaru for his cruel roundabout way of getting Kagome's words of love from her.
I look forwards to what will happen next.
Kessa
So the games came to an end, now Sesshoumaru and Kagome admitted there feelings to each other, and Sesshoumaru wants to marry her! I wonder what going to happen next? Keep it coming.
What a clever man though his roundabout way of finding her feelings were indeed cruel. It is good that they have finally confessed and the air is cleared between them.
....A faerie princess? Ok, usually this would have me running in horror, but you've impressed me so far, so I'll keep with it. And please DON'T change from the old English, I'm really enjoying reading this so far. It's refreshing to know that some people can still write this way. :)
Yay they proclaimed their love to one another! I'm excited :)
It's so funny... the more intense their proclamations became the faster I read to keep up with the intensity of it all!!! And once I read the final sentence, I could do nothing but laugh at my own intensity. Very well executed my dear!!!! I have goosebumps running all over me... even though I sit on the lip of my tub with the hot shower water running!
oh! how i swooned when i read it <sigh>. pls keepi it coming!
~Voracious
I am so glad to have found this story!!! You hace captured my heart with this story, I'm enthralled with the characters you have created and grown. Somehow, even though changed to fit their roles, Sesshoumaru and Kagome still feel familiar to me---for that I applaud you! :D Keep up this story, and many more, for I find I love your talent!
Chapter 8, can't review, too busy reading.
Chapter 6 and still enjoying it. :) Reminds me of Pride and prejudice and zombies, in that it follows the story well, then SUDDENLY different. :)
Best chapter ever! Love it, although now I'm fraught with nerves guessing what will happen next.
I remember this discussion! So well turned to suit this new situation! (chapter 3) I was wondering how you would address the fact that he is not, in fact, ugly.
I think my favorite part is the understated jokes so carefully hidden in old literature as here. such as where her curiosity bothered her teachers, and therefore her palms. :) Made me smile. So, chapter 2 continuing on lovely.
This is FANTASTIC. As soon as I began reading, i recognized the influence of Bronte, and THEN I read the author's notes. The language is so well captured, and the mood so perfect. I've only read the first chapter so far, so I'll keep you appraised of my views as we go on. Just want to let you know I'm very impressed so far.
Yus! Whoo! Now....I'm waiting for something to go wrong....lol
And she's a faery princess, no? I wonder if Mom and Pop will object to her marrying a demon lord.....huh.
I'll just have to wait and see! >.<
This story has amused me very much. You have done an excellent job with weaving the characters of such different worlds together. I am most anxious for your next update. Splendid. Absolutely splendid!
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