Hey, this story is awesome. I hope you're recovering well from Harvey.
Just glad you're back. I understand about leaving stories forever. Good luck with the water... :hugs:
First and foremost I want to send my thoughts and prayers to you. I cannot even begin to imagine the devastation caused by Hurricane Harvey. That being said, I hope you are doing well and are safe. I also want to commend you on your beautiful writing. I am greatly enjoying this story. ~Best Wishes~
Im so sorry. Prayers are with you Inari.
I typically am not crazy about Shippo, it's worse when he's constantly saying mama in every sentence in some stories (sorry, I know almost everybody loves that). This Shippo I really, really don't like. He's selfish and cruel, being a fox isn't an excuse for that. It's a unique plot twist that only creates questions, but I still can't stand him. Looking forward to the next update!
Update when you can! I am in Texas City, the last week has been so surreal its been comforting to be able to read and lose your reality. Be safe.
Oh don't worry! Just be safe! I am glad you're ok, stay safe! May God protect everyone there!
Take care and stay strong!
'Kagome felt dangerous claws caress her face gently to turn her attention away from the grizzly scene and she was not so masochistic as to fight them.' Just a little note - the word you are looking for here is grisly, not grizzly. 'Grizzly' denotes the grizzly bear, and 'grisly' means causing a shudder or feeling of horror; horrible; gruesome and/or formidable; grim.
Just figured I'd let you know... and looking forward to the next chapter.
Peace out!
Amber
Yay! Thank you!
Hn...... I must say, I was skeptical at first, but as I read the first chapter I found that I was actually SEEING what was going on. When I read that's what I look for, the fact that I came back after reading on a different site and was immediately sucked into the world you've created, I am very impressed. You really need to keep writing. And this is officially the longest review I've written. Keep up the good work, 1,000 brownie points.
After finding your story I have to say am really interested in the way you use shippo.
Another great story Inari! I just found it today and look forward to seeing it unfold.
Liking it, keep it coming.
Wow...just wow
so intense!!!! loved it !!!<3 i must have more !!!!! MOOOAAAARRRRRR ahahhaha :D hope you update soon !!!
thank you for this refreshing story .... i cant remember the last time i was so sad that there wasnt another chapter :(
I have just discovered Beneath the Light of the Moon and Tightrope. BTLM made me a bit weepy, but heavens woman, I have cried through all 5 chapters of Tightrope. Kami above can you write girl! I didnt find any of your characters OOC at all. I LOVE the way you are depicting Kagome, I prefer my heros to have feet of clay like the rest of us = ). I can hardly wait to see where you go with raising Inuyasha and Sesshomaru taking his responsibility head on. I installed a seatbelt in my computer so I can sit back, grab my tissues and hang on for the ride. Asolutely fabulous gift for telling a story. Brava !!
And don't worry about the beating and almost rape. This is still a great fic. You gave warning and didn't even describe it like some authors do (not bashing any authors that do because I still read them). This is a really good fic and I hope you don't let some of the other readers response put a damper on your creativity.
Inari! Inari! You are a freaking fiction guru. You have a talent for writing and I mean it. I just read all five chapters and I balled my eyes out. I love it and I really do hope you continue to finish this fic. Can't wait until more updates. :D
next chapter please
wow loved it thanks.
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