Hiii I came here after asking in the Dokuga forum to recommend me some good netorare (cuckold) fics and someone recommended me this fic! I am loving it, I tell you! I know it's a sick thing to be indulging in adultery and even sicker if your spouse actually is aware of it (sometimes even ordering you to), but ah that is the beauty of NTR I guess. I will be off to read the follow-up to this fic. Kudos to the gritty insight to Kagome's mind--her helplessness and her strength to brave through it all, depicted through the beautiful metaphor of drowning. Sesshoumaru's everything I hope for, cruel, unflinching, and merciless. An awesome read.
I'm not sure how I feel about this story. There's a darkness to it with so much potential. It can move in so many directions. The main area being about control. I definitely wasn't expecting what I read, and that is a bonus.
Eh... well well! This was..ehrm, unexpected, I guess. But good! Good!
I like how Kagome is the unfaithful one. Usually...is the other way around and it has a flow that we all think he's a bastard... but is like, oh well he's youkai, no? SO when it IS Kagome, who is human and good... it makes one think... and it hurts.
I liked Sesshomaru. Liked...his cold understanding and never expected more than that.
Thanks for writing!