Alpha female 1 pup 0 *snicker* one should bow to their betters. LOL!
lol loved the purity slap! I am wondering what the boys were whispering about. Great chapter.
o.o hahahahahahahaha SMACK! more please!
Wow. This is my first time on this website and was excited when I first got to it. I really do love this fanfiction and look forward to reading more of your chapters.
A clueless yet proud maru of course doesn't ask for a favor from pack. he demands it. eh, men. now lets see how auntie kagome pops this boy, eh pup up side the head. *shakes head* wonder if she'll use her powers to keep him in line. I don't see her taking his crap at all. nope a rolled up papper for the pupp with shippo snickering in the background.
It was so funny when she called him out for having everything planned. Looks like Kagome is in for a long hard battle with Takeshi. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Muahahahahaha "evil cackles." Someone is going to learn that life is hard, and not all glitter and sparkles!
And now I'm caught up. Just started reading your fic and couldn't help but click the next button.
I really like your fic. The rebeling son is interesting and his life was a little messed. Does sesshoumaru know about inuyasha? and the whole fight scene was really good. and.. yeah really like this fic did I mention that. can't wait to see what happens from here. Kagome the counceler? lol can't wait. ^__^
I love your story, just a little mistake I noticed in chapter 5 Takeshi was 10, but in chapter 7 he's 15.
I am sooooo loving where you are going with this!!
trainging your child by miko zappage? x= nice!
This was a very well written piece! I couldn't stop reading it until the very end. Well done! :) I can't wait to find out what happens next!
More!!!! Cool. Chapter! Loved when kagome called the.Common bandits!!
I really love this story, I wonder what kind of puinshment the boys are gonna get, I bet it invoves Kagome
A well written and engaging story
I wonder if the boys will cause more trouble. I can't wait for the next update! Great job.
Uh-oh it looks like little Lord Takeshi has been in trouble before. Great updates. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Update!!! Awesome story !!!
interesting... looking forward to see where you take this story
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