I know this reveiw might sound really crappy but that's because it's late and I've spent a lot of today reading your fic. Why? Because I'm fucking addicted to it. It took me two days to finish this story and it wouldn't leave my brain at all. Woman, you've made me addicted to your story and I would love to see where your taking this plot. Though you are really evil. Honestly evil. I will tell you that I kind of figured you were going to kill off Inuyasha and not Sesshomaru. Talking to my own Sesshomaru, he pointed out that Inuyasha happens to be an inu. Half or not. (Scarry how that man really does think like Sesshomaru). Regardless I'm half awake and writing this and I have to tell you that I really do love your fic and I cant wait till you update the new chapter.

OK...I'm really confused with this chapter.

First, you refer to the hut that Sango went into as having the scent of Kagome all over it when Sesshomaru enters, and Kagome is rather familiar with where things are..But, then you have them discussing Kagome's hut and wondering if it survived Naruku's destruction..then, Kagome is removing stuff from a basket she had on a high shelf!!!???

So, just how many huts does Kagome have??  This is one very confusing chapter.  There has been some confusion in past chapters, and, I will tell you now that some of the grammar, and English (Ok, alot) leaves much to be desired,  but the confusion in this chapter takes the cake!!  If it wasn't for the wonderful storyline and plot, I probably would have given up on this fic a long time ago..I have very little tolerance for poor English, and poor grammar, and poor punctuation, and poor pronunciation.

how deliciously dark for a first chapter. I was surprised where you went with it. Very interesting i love it!

Aaaahhh! *waits impatiently for the next chapter*

i say you should let sesshomaru tear inuyasha apart great story^-^ please update soon                                             

I'm so happy you didn't abandon this story. I was actually thinking about it a few days ago.

You have a few grammer mistakes, mostly repeated words and forgotten verb endings.

But I love you imagery and am so excited to see where you go with your plot.