hello! I don't usually leave reviews on dokuga (I'm one of those dreadful lurkers you hear about lol) but I just wanted to say that I absolutely love your story. It is fantastically written and I think your characterization is wonderful. It's honestly one of my favorite sxk stories that I always come back to and always enjoy rereading. I just wanted to say thank you for taking the time to write and post it:)
wow
i enjoyed the story a lot
and its so true
fear creates hate
Love this
Such an excellent story, just had to reread. :)
Absolutely enjoyable! I can honestly say I thoroughly enjoyed each chapter and the details you wrapped into each scenerio. I would highly suggesto to continue writing because you a truly a good writer.
this was amazing. keep up the good work and writing
Though shorter than most of my other reads, the story and the characters' progressions flowed very well. The ending was nicely tied off too! Simply loved it!
Wow... just wow! I love it! I saw your forum post and thought 'eh, I'll give it a try' and boy am I glad I did! It's beautifully written! Thank you for sharing this with us!
omg this.... this... wow i LOVED this story!!! Absolutely amazing!! Please continue to write like this cause this was a thrilling read. I read the whole thing in under 6 hours >.>
loved it!
-stands up and claps- bloodly brillant!!! One of the few stories that were not baesd in the past i've read and actually enjoyed, keep the good work up!!!
I read here all the time and I am awaiting more of your masterful pieces...In other words I love it ^_^
Brilliant.
The interactions between Sesshomaru and Kagome (not to mention the incredibly sexy and tasteful lemons) made this story very good.
But it was Sesshomaru's speech and the imagery of all those Youkai taking off their bracelets and showing their true selves that made this story amazing.
T_T this was beautiful! lol i loved every moment of it!
KAR
Wah! this was such a wonderful fic!! I can't believe I didn't read it before now. T_T Thank you for your amazing contribution. xoxoxo
AWWWWWW (*tear*) i wish you didnt end the story so early it was getting really good.
I hope you're happy with yourself- I lost 2 hours yesterday and several more today carefully reading every single word of this fic. I loved it. You managed to not just write a poignant love story, but to tackle the very heavy issue of human rights. There's many things that come to mind when you discuss the families being torn apart- the nazis and th destruction they created by murdering thousands of disabled citizens, then moving on to murder and torture thousands of Jews; the horrific things done to the African Americans as they fought to escape slavery and the stigma attached to the color of their skin. Many human rights groups still fight, for equality, justice, and the right for people to live freely- I, myself, have faced discrimination in the past, due to being disabled, though thankfully nothing major yet. There is a huge measure of truth to the way you show people over coming the lack of understanding. Knowing someone personally, in a positive light, prevents that lack of understanding, erases it in many. I feel, personally, that I can not ask for people to understand my disability unless I am willing to teach them about it. Thankfully, the lessons learned are ones that apply for the rest of the world. Basically, all of that is to say: thank you, for getting people thinking, in addition to giving them a love story to deeply enjoy along the way.
What a nice little story. I thought you handled the fallout in a believable manner. There was still lots of drama and love and good triumphing over ignorance. I hopthat here are more like this to come because I can't wait to see what comes next :)
This is one of the most beautiful, well-written, and wonderfully thought out stories that I have ever read. It was exciting and had a twist that I had never seen in a Sesshoumaru/Kagome story. Amazing job, I love it.
*crooked smile*When Sango had her cameo, I was hoping she would was not an anti-youkai activist.
When you wrote about Kagura's bare-wristed photos being all over media, the image was vivid in my mind.
I believe, and this is only my opinion, that the speech which you gave Sesshoumaru in chapter 11 was the heart of this story. Yes, it was an enjoyable romp: a nice amount of everything bitter, sweet and hopeful.:)
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