So sad but over all a good chapter.
Keep it up, keep it coming. 
How God Created Mother
  Good took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
  Happy Mother's Day! 
  
      
rachel (Chapter 1) -  Sat 10 May 2014 
You can never disappoint . By why?:(  
this is so good! Awww I feel bad now, but amazing story ! 
      
Akita (Chapter 17) - Sat 10 May 2014 
Sesshomaru the jerk....not cool.  
  
Great update! 
      
Ana (Chapter 17) -  Sat 10 May 2014 
I can’t believe Shippou’s dead… And Sess turning away so easily… :( you actually made me cry… 
Thanks for the update <3  
      
yesss! imagine how pissed kagome will be if/when she finds out that sesshoumaru could've helped her.  cant wait   please continue :D 
      
Wonderful story!!!! I absolutely love it! 
      
rachel (Chapter 16) -  Mon 05 May 2014 
NOOOOO!!! why did he have to die?:( 
      
Yuyue (Chapter 16) -  Sun 04 May 2014 
I realy love this story...> A <...it's always make my heat "doki-doki"... 
So please make more "doki-doki" moment... 
But, please don't kill shippo...TT--TT... 
  
      
sorry! I guess I wasn't logged in... that was me below lol 
      
Anonymous (Chapter 16) - Sun 04 May 2014 
oooooooooh myyyyyyyyyy KAMI! You can't do that tome!lol my heart is beating so fast right now, update soon so I don't die of suspense haha 
  
-DC 
      
Great chapter can't wait for the next one!!!!!!!!! 
      
Shaneka (Chapter 16) -  Fri 02 May 2014 
Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next one. 
      
Ana (Chapter 16) -  Fri 02 May 2014 
No.... Not Shippou.... Please....  
An amaizing chapter!  
Thanks for the update! <3 
      
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