Keep it coming.
I'd personally really love to see this story continue as it is going. Little stories of Sesshoumaru and Kagome acting like puppies, getting into messes, and as they're growing taking care of each other (such as taking the blame for each other), and I guess if you desire conflict, having an assassination attempt that brings out Kagome's miko powers as she attempts to defend Sesshoumaru.
I image anything you do will be fabulous. I love this story so far.
you need a few bounts of puppy adventures, things that only a puppy can get into. perhaps you should make them grow into BIG puppies so when their adventures get going they really mess things up, like maybe both should be rolly polly pupppies but the save of small grate danes. that come up to papa's hip before they can change into a human form. !
i'd like to see that
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