This is my second or third time reading this delightful story...hoping to find that stated updating. I do have it in my favs/follow's list. :)
I will be glad when you can start writing on this and catching back up with y and our stories.
I love this one in particular because Kagome is starting out with Sesshomaru instead of Inuyasha as a possible love interest and their growing relationship starting off as children. I think they are adorable together.
I hope their relationship continues into their adulthood and that neither of them have a circumstance where they forget each other although it would add more drama to the story. There are a couple or so nicely written stories out there that already have that plot idea.
Whichever direction you weave your ideas, I'm sure it will be a fascinating and interesting turn of events and make for nice reading as you did with 'Bitter as Chocolate' ...loved that story btw.
Looking forward to future updates on this very nicely written story!
Cheers!!!
ponpiri (Chapter 58) - Wed 20 Sep 2017
Now I'm at the end. I'll say that if Atsuki is meant to be a contributing character in the future maybe including him more often would be better. So far he hasn't been that noteworthy enough to get attached to him. Then there's also the balance between developing an OC and making sure they don't become the story. I'm sure you can do it though.
ponpiri (Chapter 20) - Tue 19 Sep 2017
This is really cute. I always love your characterization of Inu mama and pop. I cannot stand the father, so that's a testiment to how well you treat then both.
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