Hot intense man you did an awesome job, you had me sucked in from the being and provide perfect description that I felt more like I was watching this more then reading and it made my breath catch in a few place and i forgot to breate because it was so intense. You didan amazing job writing this totally a favorite.
It might just be me, but I like this. Then again... I've failed at writing fluffy and warm for as long as I can remember so I might just like this because while it is much better then most of what I've written it is something that I would have tried. Very nice, if they had a rating system I would give you a 9.5/10. Good job.
Intense smut! While I enjoyed it there was just so much emotion and choas in the air when I read it, I think you did a really good job of illustrating the struggle for them to be together but also to distance themselves from each other. :)
