*snickers* I can really imagine Sesshomaru as a closet hentai! Someone that gorgeous and with a voice that sinful would have to beat women away with a stick! But damn, the frosty personality only makes him that much better than Inu-baka
Sango has to get her dose os Kagome-chan! I love this fic, really well written and nice to read. The characters are good to, great job
Charlene (Chapter 15) - Tue 13 Mar 2012
| I enjoyed the story and yet it felt like pieces had been left out. Rin never did appear and poor Shippo got left with his crayons. Sango was pregnant, unmarried, and then was having her baby. How did Kikyo develop the ability to have kids or pups? What happened to the guard that was guarding Kagome? Did Kagome ever make it through the well to get the baby items for Sango? Kagome and Sess both decided the other was going to be their mate but never mentioned to each other? Why would the villagers suddenly turn against them? What happened to Kaede?
Venita (Chapter 14) - Fri 09 Mar 2012
Keep it coming.
Venita (Chapter 4) - Thu 08 Mar 2012
Both chapters are great, please update soon.
Pepper spray with enhanced senses? Ooooo.... that can't feel good. :P
Poor Shippo. Gotta track Kagome down now.
Can't wait for more!
Well, Sesshoumaru is acting oddly out of character, but it's still a good story. Keep up the good work. :)
Venita (Chapter 2) - Tue 06 Mar 2012
Great great, please update soon.
Venita (Chapter 1) - Sat 03 Mar 2012
Great start, please update soon.
To Lady Nefertiti: I noticed that you are writing again. Yes, I do agree that Inuyasha is acting out of the "norm", but it is common in the fanfiction world. I just want to review and say that your story is good, so far, but you might want to limit your exclamation marks after each of Inuyasha's sentences. He has a gruff personality, but it doesn't look too good if he yells out every sentence. I'm not a writer, myself, so I'm not judging you. :D Please continue to thrill readers with your stories. Lord knows that we need more authors in the fanfiction world. LOL.
-RubyJeweler
Good start. Can't wait to see where it goes. :)
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