Aaaaah, development xD ...... I'm greatly anticipating what will happen next, can't wait.
You write beautifully (I think I mentioned before), danke schon for sharing with us all ;)
~lily
My heart breaks for Sesshoumaru a little more with every chapter. To be so utterly alone, tired and resigned. He needs someone that will allow him to enjoy living again. (or want to make him live again with a fierce intensity) You covey thought and emotions so beautifully in your writing!
Ooooh, I like this new one ;) ....... And those last two lines: Humans despise death. He yearned for it...... Poetic, and lovely, the hooked me :)
~lily